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Post by shaxper on Jul 3, 2014 14:00:37 GMT -5
Having now made significant headway on the site, and on restoring some of my old threads, I finally have time to return to MoKF! Deadly Hands of Kung Fu #2 Whereas the first issue attempted to allure readers with images of Bruce Lee and promises of teaching the reader Kung Fu while seemingly including Shang-Chi as an after-thought, this issue's cover is focused entirely upon Shang-Chi and his two stories within. It's more obvious than ever that Shang-Chi was quickly becoming a Marvel sensation. (Untitled) writer: Steve Englehart pencils: Alan Lee Weis inks: Al Milgrom grade: B+ The first feature begins as a relatively uninteresting tale in which Shang-Chi stumbles upon a group of assassins experimented upon and later discarded by Fu Manchu. Shang Chi attempts to earn their trust but, when he is unwilling to partake in the revenge they have planned, they turn on him and a brawl ensues. It's really not at all interesting until we get to the close where, after a hard-fought battle to make them see reason, Shang-Chi walks away, feeling as if he's finally made a non-violent impact on the world and has finally gained a set of friends in the process, only to have Fu Manchu blow up their hideout, killing everyone within, as a message to Shang Chi. It's so powerful, so delightfully wicked, that I found myself inappropriately giggling in response. New artist Alan Lee Weis does a commendable job on pencils, and I really like how he draws Fu Manchu so much more decrepit and twisted than Starlin. Of course, Fu Manchu has an elixir of life and extensive experience with genetic manipulation, so it's unlikely he'd be in such physical condition. Best line from the story: "Now I can take your life with one swift blow--in any one of many manners! But to do so would be the act of a madman...and I am not mad. I prefer to take your trust."Continuity-wise, there is still no conflict between the Master of Kung Fu and Deadly Hands of Kung Fu continuities at this point. Minor Details: - What's up with "Mr. Man," the cross-dressing villain? plot synopsis: pretty much covered above. (note: the second Shang-Chi feature in this issue is a reprint of Special Marvel Edition #15 due to deadline problems explained on page 47)
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Post by Roquefort Raider on Jul 3, 2014 14:39:21 GMT -5
I read that story in the Master of Kung Fu Treasury Edition wayyyyy back in 78; I remember how weird Mr.Man seemed then. Was he inspired by the Rocky Horror Picture Show?
Later issues of Deadly hands seemed disconnected from the main book's continuity, but I enjoyed how the first few issues dealt with Fu Manchu and Chi's early days in the western world. (I think I should try and find more issues of that run)!
Great to see this thread back, btw!
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Post by shaxper on Jul 3, 2014 14:58:34 GMT -5
Master of Kung Fu #19 "Retreat" writer: Steve Englehart pencils: Paul Gulacy inks: Al Milgrom letters: Tom Orzechowski colors; Stan Goldberg editor: Roy Thomas grade: C- Steve Englehart's final issue (the letter column announces Doug Moench taking over next month), and it's an odd one. Rather than a coherent story, this feels like a confusing amalgam of half-considered ideas. Man-Thing shows up for seemingly no reason and goes under-used while Shang-Chi pours his heart out to new compatriot Lu Sun, who appeared out of nowhere in the middle of a swamp and has a surprising amount of knowledge about Man-Thing. Shang-Chi never once questions where he came from nor what his motives are because, of course, Chinese wise-men frequently hang out in the most baron parts of the Flordia Everglades. To be fair, Shang Chi is still heavily drugged from last issue, but this is just...odd. It's also weird that Lu Sun's challenging Shang-Chi's actions in opposing Fu Manchu somehow give him a new resolve and inner strength when, by the close, it's only left him with more doubt and questions. One technique Englehart continues to employ that I enjoy greatly is not overly catering to the reader. He regularly presents Shang-Chi as an unreliable narrator, often unable to understand his own feelings/motivations and, this time, not even able to accurately perceive his exterior surroundings (due to being drugged), without ever throwing this in the reader's face. A particularly charged moment in this story comes when Shang-Chi feels tremendous remorse for killing the two assassins tailing him. We later see that they are not dead and, in fact, only experienced minor injuries. Shang-Chi never bothers to say, "I was mistaken! It must have been the drugs!!" Englehart trusts us to figure this out on our own. In the end, though, I really did not understand this issue, even if there's an impressive Taoist peace by the close, as lack of a final answer/direction somehow creates its own calm. Important Details: - First appearance of Lu Sun, though nothing is revealed about him. - Guest appearance by Man-Thing Minor Details: - In Deadly Hands of Kung Fu #2, Shang-Chi had a clear stance against revenge. Here, he's less sure. Not quite a continuity problem, but it might mark our first piece of evidence that these two titles were not intended to follow a shared continuity. - Whereas we thought Shang-Chi was just offering us a standard flashback at the start of the story, Englehart ends up using this to surprising effect in creating a sense of disorientation in Shang-Chi's mind while fighting the drugs in his system, unable to focus on the present moment. Nice narrative trickery. plot synopsis in one ridiculously long sentence: Shang-Chi is fighting (and losing to) the Man-Thing, he thinks back to how this began with his being pursued by assassins and believing he had killed them, Lu Sun mysteriously arrives to help rescue Shang-Chi from Man-Thing, Shang-Chi ends up opening up to Lu Sun about his mission to oppose his father and the doubts he faces, Nayland Smith and a battalion of federal agents attempt to take down Fu Manchu, but he manages to evade them, the assassins show up again to attack Shang-Chi and Lu Sun, but Man-Thing arrives and ends up killing them with their own fear. The positive thing about this being the worst Shang-Chi story yet is that it leaves me more excited than ever for Doug Moench to take over the reigns next issue.
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Post by Roquefort Raider on Jul 4, 2014 10:03:13 GMT -5
Shang-Chi must have recognized Lu Sun for who he really was! Kwai Chang Caine!
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Post by shaxper on Jul 5, 2014 0:54:00 GMT -5
Shang-Chi must have recognized Lu Sun for who he really was! Kwai Chang Caine! Do you think that's what Englehart was actually trying to imply? He really didn't look like David Carradine.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 5, 2014 1:03:09 GMT -5
In the upcoming letter pages several fans at the time comment on the resembblance and the editors imply it was intended.
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Post by shaxper on Jul 5, 2014 10:20:24 GMT -5
In the upcoming letter pages several fans at the time comment on the resembblance and the editors imply it was intended. -M Interesting. Thanks for this. And, though under-explained at this point, Shang-Chi's ability to sense others' Chi might explain why he never once questioned who this stranger was nor his motives. So, essentially, this was just an opportunity for Englehart to throw both the readers and Shang-Chi a bone in his final story.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 5, 2014 12:45:55 GMT -5
I think part of it was that Shang Chi was getting a lot of comparisons and comments as being a Kaine rip off, and Englehart & Starlin wanted to include a Kaine-like character to show the audience just how different from Kaine Shang was, and that the book was not a Kung Fu rip off....so they included the character here as a juxtaposition to Shang to highlight those ideas.
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Post by Cei-U! on Jul 5, 2014 13:02:04 GMT -5
I could swear I read that the artwork was ordered altered by editorial because the resemblance to Carradine/Caine was too close for the legal department. Hence the mustache.
Cei-U! But don't quote me!
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Post by shaxper on Jul 7, 2014 22:00:30 GMT -5
Enter the DougIn June of 1974, Shang-Chi fans were introduced to new writer Doug Moench, who would go on to define the character and series despite facing daunting obstacles. Doug Moench's arrival at Marvel was anything but likely. Working from Chicago, Moench had managed to build a career out of writing horror stories, largely via the Warren Publishing magazines. He couldn't have expected that, by 1974, Marvel would be looking to expand its focus beyond traditional superheroes into swords & sorcery, sci-fi, martial arts, and (yes) horror. As Moench told it: Six and a half years ago my phone rings in Chicago. It is Roy Thomas, offering me work at Marvel. He's seen my horror stories for Warren; other Marvel people (chief among them, Marv Wolfman) have recommended me; Marvel is willing to take a chance. But there is a catch. Marvel not only needs a new writer, they also need a new proofreader--or, if you will, an assistant editor. Therefore, to write for Marvel, I must also proofread for Marvel. I am uncertain, her on the phone six and a half years ago in comfortable, habit-forming Chicago. Wanting very much to write for Marvel, I'm none too sure I will enjoy or even appreciate working on staff 9-5, nor am I too keen about living in New York, an obvious and concomitant necessity. A two week trial period is proposed by me, accepted by Roy. But even before the end of those two weeks, I have made my decision. Sure, I'll lose some sleep, but the Marvel offices aren't that bad. Yes, my eyes will be red and weary, but the people in the Bullpen are largely a good crew, nice and motley. good and zany. Aye, everything around me will be most alien and strange, but New York is at least tolerable. So I accept the job. But there is also a catch on my end. Money. I do not have much of the stuff, and need a lot of it to accomplish the "permanent" move from Chicago to New York. How about if I quickly write a dozen 6-10 page "horror" stories for the fledgling line of Marvel black and white magazines? Would that cover expenses? Yes, I say, it would indeed. And so, newly ensconced in Manhatten, I work 9AM to 5PM in the Marvel offices, and 7PM to 2 or 3AM in my new apartment (seemingly rented by the square inch, its worth measured by weight in gold)--turning out a story a night. My life becomes nothing less than Work with a capital W, and nothing more than a Blur with a capital B. So, in his first weeks at Marvel, Moench was already working late into the night -- every night -- to produce backup features for Creatures on the Loose, Haunt of Horrors, Tales of the Zombie, and Monsters Unleashed. Once his trial period was over, he concurrently began the Deathlock run on Astonishing Tales, the lead feature(s) in Planet of the Apes magazine, Werewolf by Night, and (of course) Master of Kung Fu and Deadly Hands of Kung Fu. He also continued to have stories published in the Marvel horror titles and would soon take on a myriad of other assignments that no one else particularly wanted, including titles as disparate as Doc Savage, Unknown Worlds of Science Fiction, and Shogun Warriors. Roy Thomas explains how Doug Moench was elected to take over Master of Kung Fu and Deadly Hands of Kung Fu: A good time is the basic thing Steve [Englehart] wants from his work, Bill, so it's what he always tries to provide with it. Unfortunately for him, this series he had worked so hard to bring about proved so popular that he couldn't keep up with it and still handle it the way he wanted it. Exit Steve. But fortunately for Marveldom Assembled, Devi-May-Care Doug had just taken up residence in the Bullpen, so he is able to write Shang-Chi's multiple appearances, and soon, Iron Fist's as well. Doug, already garnered an excellent reputation elsewhere in the industry; and before his stint at scripting he held down a reporter's job in old Chicago. We were going to close this reply with a pun on Doug's last name--but frankly, nobody around here's really sure how he pronounces the blamed thing! So if you can doug it, we'll quietly take our leave. The important thing to consider here is that Doug was given these jobs because he was available, not because he necessarily had any knowledge or experience of the niche genres he was now to write. Planet of the Apes had a learning curve all it's own, never mind enmeshing himself in both the genre of Kung Fu and the continuities already established concerning Shang-Chi (only a couple of issues thus far) and Fu Manchu (uh-oh). It's astounding that Moench pulled off an even adequate job on these titles, let alone made each a classic in its own right, with Master of Kung Fu, Deathlok, and his Planet of the Apes run all still revered by comics fans today. Not quite sure what happened to his doing the Iron Fist run, though. That ultimately went to (at the time unheard of assistant editor) Chris Claremont. And, incidentally, I hear it's pronounced "Mench," Roy Thomas
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Post by Roquefort Raider on Jul 8, 2014 10:01:19 GMT -5
And, incidentally, I hear it's pronounced "Mench," Roy Thomas That it is, but in a lettercol in MoKF it was once said to rhyme with "wench". So foreign-language speaking me pronounced Moench "Mwench" for more than a decade.
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Post by shaxper on Jul 9, 2014 13:23:53 GMT -5
Quick Announcement
I'll be on vacation from tonight through next Tuesday (July 15th). Reviews will resume soon after.
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Post by shaxper on Jul 20, 2014 10:06:56 GMT -5
Master of Kung-Fu #20 "Weapon of the Soul" writer: Gerry Conway (part 1), Doug Moench (part 2) pencils: Paul Gulacy inks: Al Milgrom letters: David Hunt colors: George Roussos editor: Roy Thomas grade: C- Sometimes, i think the most interesting thing about being the low man on the totem pole is watching the behavior of the guy just above you. In the case of Doug Moench, joining Marvel's Bullpen in 1974, that man right above him would appear to be Gerry Conway. In this month, Conway was slated to take on at least three new projects that he clearly did not want. One of these was Werewolf by Night (which got pushed to Doug Moench instead), another was the new Planet of the Apes magazine (which also got pushed to Moench, with credit for the story concept erroneously given to Conway even though he never touched it), and a third was this very issue, begun by Conway, and finished by Moench. It's a weird transition from one author to the other. Conway plays up Shang-Chi's compassionate pacifist side (even applying acupuncture to relieve his defeated opponents of pain), while Moench plays up the heavy narratives, as well as a more bad-ass Shang-Chi who doesn't go looking for fights, and yet sure doesn't mind finishing them. Beyond that, though, no bold new direction for Shang-Chi can be glimpsed here yet. I am a little disappointed with this issue for two reasons. The first is Doug's exposing his own ignorance on the topic. I don't expect him to know about acupuncture the way Conway did, or to do anything else to impress us with his knowledge of the subject when the title has clearly just been dumped on him at the last moment, but to have Fu Manchu, a Chinese crime lord, employing an amoral mercenary samurai is just so completely, thoroughly, off the mark that it hurts. Samurai are Japanese and honor bound to their lords. Okay, to be fair, there are a number of ways that this could be explained away (Fu Manchu now outsources his assassins? This Samurai has been driven insane by the elixir or allowed it to compromise his values??), but Moench doesn't try because it honestly seems like he doesn't know that there's a problem with any of this. Don't include a samurai in your story if you don't know what a samurai is. The second is the sheer amount of coincidences the climax of this story depends upon, from the samurai needing his elixir of life right in the middle of his battle with Shang-Chi (one would think he would have planned better), to that being the dose that finally ravages and kills his body after years of use, to his sword accidentally striking and killing the love of the villain who orchestrated all of this. If Moench wants to suggest that Chi or karma directed all of this, he should say so. Otherwise, it all suspends disbelief just a tad too far. Again, this assignment was dumped on Moench at the last moment (along with Planet of the Apes, Werewolf by Night, and a host of other work), so I can't fully blame him for a poor first outing. I know it will get better. Minor Detail: Why would a small time crime boss think that hiring one of Fu Manchu's assassins to kill Shang-Chi would impress Fu Manchu? It's Fu Manchu's assassin, after all. All the guy did was place the order and pay him money. plot synopsis in one sentence: Assassins come after Shang-Chi (who is still in Florida), he learns they were sent by a small time crime boss, the crime boss hires a samurai mercenary to get Shang-Chi, Shang-Chi confronts the crime boss to learn why he is trying to kill him, the assassin strikes, is revealed to be dependent upon Fu Manchu's elixir of life, but the elixir is unable to help him anymore, and he dies, inadvertently killing the crime boss's girlfriend at the same time, and the crime boss reveals his motive was to win favor with Fu Manchu and earn enough money for he and his girlfriend to live happily.
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Post by shaxper on Jul 20, 2014 10:09:20 GMT -5
(my mistake. I inadvertently had this review ahead of Master of Kung Fu #20, when, in fact, it was published two weeks after) Deadly Hands of Kung Fu #3 The fan poll for DHoKF #1 shows Shang-Chi coming in as the second most liked feature behind the lead article about Bruce Lee. Not bad. "Web of Bleeding Vipers!" writer: Doug Moench pencils: Pail Gulacy inks: Al Milgrom grade: B- Doug Moencb's first genuine crack at Shang-Chi (last issue doesn't really count when you consider he was just rushing to finish a story started by someone else). While he's clearly done his homework since rushing to complete MoKF #20 and brings back certain traits we've seen from Shang-Chi before (believes talking during combat is foolish, believes weapons are a waste as well), he's also quick to take the character to a new level. While Englehart's Shang-Chi was well trained in combat and philosophy, he was generally portrayed as a novice when it came to internal thought -- a naive character who had never questioned before and whose inner thoughts were generally quiet unless provoked. In contrast, Doug Moench portrays Shang-Chi as having the mind of a philosopher and the soul of a poet, presumably as a result of the years of extensive education in Eastern philosophy and culture he had received in addition to his martial arts training. While I can't claim to have read a vast array of Moench's early work prior to this (I have some of his Warren and Skywald stuff, but not enough), it seems like this is the beginning of Moench's dense introspective prose that will appear so prolifically in many of his works that follow. At this early point, it comes across unevenly here, sometimes ingeniously insightful and sometimes laborious. An example that walks the line between the two: "The truck begins to move...and a thing of beauty fills my thoughts.
Why does the spider move so slowly? Does it not realize that the truck moves so rapidly as to render a spider's inner progress meaningless?
Has it wandered into this truck in search of its web...and found instead a trap more stifling than any web?
Or is the truck large enough to comprise a new realm of freedom?
And how has the spider chosen correctly...when my motionless hand may act as a deadly trap...
...or a platform of comfort...?It's ALMOST really intelligent stuff, reminding me of those rare magical moments where the mind drifts off into a higher plane of reflection. And yet, it also comes off as a bit forced and nonsensical at the same time. Moench is barking up the right tree -- this is an interesting take on the character -- but it isn't quite clicking yet. Also gone in this issue are those delightful reminders Englehart would always offer us that 1) Shang-Chi's moral code was not our own and, 2) that he lacked a full awareness of himself. I really liked those traits and felt they did an important job of depicting a soul that had not yet risen, but Moench's more introspective approach should offer some very rewarding character development in contrast. If only one could have more gradually developed into the other. Also worth mentioning that Englehart's Shang-Chi was very conflicted about killing (even as of last issue), yet kicks the Adder out of a multi-story window without a second thought. Minor Details: - At this point, Deadly Hands of Kung Fu's continuity is still working alongside Master of Kung Fu's. Moench is able to offer us this side plot that is irrelevant to his larger arc concerning Fu Manchu and Nayland Smith. - At the same time, it almost seems as if Moench had plans for Linda Fong at this point. Her plight so closely parallels Shang-Chi, she has no idea where she is going next, and the story ends without their having parted ways. Perhaps Moench was told he could not use her further since she was introduced in Deadly Hands as opposed to the main title? As stated before, the b/w mags did not reach the same demographics nor the same number of readers, so having an important development occur in Deadly Hands and then spill over into the main title would inevitably alienate readers. plot synopsis in one sentence: Shang-Chi is visiting China Town in an attempt to reconnect with his past but is vastly disappointed, he stumbles upon thugs abducting a fleeing woman and intercedes, only to get captured by them when they hold a knife to her throat, but Shang-Chi is able to escape and rescue the woman, killing the thugs and their leader; the woman explains her name is Linda Fong and that her would-be murderer was her own father, The Adder, a drug lord that she had just uncovered and had fled in horror, so Shang-Chi appears to find connection with her in that they both learned terrible things about their fathers and felt the need to oppose them, leaving Shang-Chi to decide that "the past is best...forgotten" Not a brilliant issue, but you can feel Moench's gears attempting to catch, all while Gulacy's art becomes stronger with each installment. It's clear that excellence is on the way.
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Post by Cei-U! on Jul 20, 2014 10:54:53 GMT -5
I'm not sure why you're surprised that Conway know about acupuncture in '74. Anybody who was paying attention back then knew about it (16-year-old me did). Celebrities were singing its praises and it was at the forefront of the alternative medicine movement. Hell, my 10th grade Health teacher had an acupuncture chart hanging in her classroom!
Cei-U! That quibble aside, good reviews!
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