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Post by shaxper on May 26, 2014 19:15:12 GMT -5
Batman #426 (continued)
"A Death in the Family, Chapter 2" writer: Jim Starlin pencils: Jim Aparo inks: Mike DeCarlo letters: John Costanza colors: Adrienne Roy asst. editor: Dan Raspler editor: Denny O'Neil creator: Bob Kane
grade: D+
Chapter two feels weaker to me than part one, largely because it suffers from the same gaps in logic without adding anything to it. We lack the raw human emotion of part one, Jason's now a jerk, and Bruce is pretty much the judgmental guardian who just keeps making faces at everything Jason does in this issue. Bruce claims that being together again as Batman and Robin partway through this chapter "feels good," but I don't see it, and I don't agree. Both characters are pretty obnoxious by this point.
Minor notes:
Batman mentions his CIA contact, Ralph Bundy, helping him out in getting access to the Joker's stolen naval helicopter this issue. Ralph Bundy was the CIA agent who worked with Batman in Ten Nights of the Beast.
Batman finds a pilot that's been shot in the head and proclaims, "The dead naval pilot, in the cockpit, confirms my suspicions. This is the Joker's handiwork, all right."
...uh, why? Is the Joker really the only criminal who would shoot the pilot in the head after abducting a helicoptor? Starlin really doesn't know how to write the Joker if he thinks this makes sense. The Joker is all about flamboyance and trademarks. Some Joker gas, a playing card, even a funny message would be the Joker's handiwork, not a cold-blooded, pragmatic murder.
Bruce walks around in costume but with the cowl off in the middle of the Lebanese outback after taking down a few terrorists. Surely there can't be any others hiding in the ridges or about to walk up that section of the mountain. And no one's going to ultimately wonder why an (ultimately) fully changed Bruce Wayne would be driving away from a terrorist meeting site in a truck licensed to terrorists.
As mentioned earlier, it takes Robin two panels to hack a top secret Israeli military computer and get all the information he needs, right after sneaking into an Israeli military compound with unlocked windows and no alarms, motion detectors, nor video cameras. Meanwhile, it took him the entire night to find pictures and info on the three women he'd already found in his father's address book, complete with last known addresses.
Bruce asks to be taken to the "worst section" of Beirut and declares: "This is exactly what I'm looking for. Weapon smuggling has got to be the area's leading commerce."
No, moron. Weapon smuggling pays GOOD money and requires strong start-up capital, ergo the people who do it well would live in nicer neighborhoods. Does Starlin honestly think that all crime happens in seedy back alleys? "Hey man, you wanna patriot missile? First buy's free."
Of course, Bruce and Jason, pursuing two entirely unrelated objectives, end up in the same continent, the same country, the same region, the same city, and ultimately the same side of the same street block at the same time, just as they see the woman Jason is pursuing hanging off of the arm of the Joker's weapons broker. Bear in mind that neither Bruce nor Jason had specific information to suggest exactly when or where they would find either of these people beyond knowing they were somewhere in Beirut. Starlin loves his cheap conveniences.
Even a climax with a Joker who never once cracks a joke can't save this chapter.
The plot synopsis in one ridiculously long sentence:
Batman and the CIA coordinate the recapturing of a naval helicopter the Joker stole to get to Lebanon, Bruce checks in with Alfred and learns Jason has gone to Israel, Jason breaks into an Israeli military compound and learns Sharmin Rosen, the first woman he is pursuing, is on secret assignment in Lebanon, Bruce goes to Beirut in search of the buyers of Joker's cruise missile, he and Jason run into each other and catch each other up, Sharmin Rosen shows up courting the Joker's weapons broker (again, how convenient!), they pursue the two to the site of the weapons deal, Joker gives a terrorist the launch code for the missile, Batman and Robin attack, Sharmin Rosen reveals that she's secretly on their side (well duh! Why did Starlin expect this to surprise us?), the weapon's broker holds Sharmin at gun point, Jason risks his life to save her by drawing the gunman's fire, the terrorist attempts to fire the missile, Sharmin uses the distraction Jason has caused to take down her captor, and the missile blows up on its launcher, killing the terrorists and leaving a conveniently unscathed Joker to wander away, sad that his money has been destroyed, Batman and Robin ask Sharmin Rosen whether she ever had a baby in Gotham and she says no, they decide to go together to check out Shiva Woosen next, and we see a disguised Joker buying a passport for Ethiopia, where we know Sheila Haywood, the third candidate will be found.
The conveniences just keep mounting in this story. Of course Jason's mother will be the third candidate, and of course the Joker is going to exactly where Jason's mother is. Never mind the convenience of all three candidates randomly being located in the middle east at the exact same time when only one of them lives there.
It's really sad watching my childhood nostalgia go out the window as I discover with my adult eyes just how much this story sucks. Can't wait for the next issue...
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Post by shaxper on May 26, 2014 19:15:52 GMT -5
Detective Comics #593
"Case Book: The Batman -- The Fear Part Two: Diary of a Madman" writer: John Wagner(?) and Alan Grant pencils: Norm Breyfogle inks: Steve Mitchell colors: Adrienne Roy asst. editor: Dan Raspler editor: Denny O'Neil (Note: no Bob Kane credit this issue)
Grade: B
So we finally get a full read on Cornelius Stirk in this issue, and I must say that it lived up to my expectations. It's still odd to see such a grounded, street-level writing approach like Grant's take on super-powered beings. It felt completely misplaced with The Corrosive Man, but Stirk is disturbingly real enough in his characterization, particularly in being so committed to proving he's not insane (Poe, anyone?), and the Arkham doctors' dispassionate approach to his amazing abilities (rather than taking a Stan Lee, "My God!" approach) also lent it some credibility.
So he has psi-powers that include the ability to make him appear however he wants to others and may also allow him to create full-scale delusions (i.e. when he "hypnotized" Batman) and read minds (how else would he immediately know that Batman witnessed his parents being murdered before him when Batman only admitted his greatest fear he saw was a boy?).
However, the most fascinating thing about Stirk is his belief that he must drain the fear from his victims in order to "remain" sane, cooking their hearts and drinking the juices. Still, great as this was, it felt like the theft of another great British writer to recently tackle Batman -- Alan Moore, who made Clayface III's need to melt others in order to remain stable a psychological obsession rather than a physical need. Of course, Stirk's approach is far more disturbing.
I'm not happy with how Grant depicts Batman in this issue. We've seen a bit of this before, but Batman is far too amateur in this issue, looking to see what Stirk has been cooking, presumably because he suspects there's something terrible in there, and yet exclaiming "--MY GOD!" when seeing its contents. He also enters Stirk's apartment by declaring "Cornelius Stirk!" rather than allowing his intimidating appearance speak for itself or even scoping out the apartment to determine if anyone is actually inside before entering. Additionally, when Stirk takes him down, he simply shoots Batman in the leg and then appears to walk over slowly before knocking him out with the butt of a gun. I'd expect Batman to be a little more resourceful than that, still able to take down an opponent of average physical stamina with one wounded leg. Certainly, Miller's Batman could have done this, and I suspect Barr's, Collins', and Starlin's Batmans could have as well. Finally, there's Batman's utterly embarrassing reaction to seeing Stirk's ability to change his appearance:
you...you have a power like that...and you use it to HURT people? You're crazy!
Between those lines and Breyfogle's penciling of his face, Batman looks more uncomposed in response to this revelation than he did in response to Deacon Blackfire's expert torture of him in The Cult, which caused him to mope around for three issues about how Blackfire had broken him. Sorry guys, this is not my Batman. It takes a lot more than tying him up and revealing your powers to break him.
One minor point: Just last issue, Stirk did not have an address on file, causing Batman to seek out his probation officer instead. Suddenly, in this issue, Stirk has an address on file.
Steve Mitchell begins inking Breyfogle's art in this issue. At first, I found his work under-inked and unimpressive for most of the story. Then I got to the climax. Once Batman breaks free, all those menacing heavy inks dominate to make Breyfogle's Batman look as menacing as ever, more an etheral entity of vengeance than a person in a costume. I really respected that decision.
Page 8 provides the Death in the Family "Someone will die because the Joker wants revenge, but you can prevent it" ad in color for the first time. It's now abundantly clear that the figure Batman is carrying in his arms is definitely Robin. This once again makes it obvious that the idea of Death in the Family wasn't to vote on whether or not Jason would die; it was to kill Jason, but to give fan voters a chance to save him. It's a minor difference to most, but it's an issue of intent to me. Starlin wrote the story as if Jason was going to die, throwing together a B plan just in case he didn't.
The plot synopsis in one ridiculously long sentence: Stirk terrifies his next victim to death while reflecting on how he doesn't believe a sane man needs medicine, cooks something as his own home-brewed "medicine" to keep him sane (a contradiction to what he'd just said), Batman gets his address from his file at Arkham and arrives just as Stirk has left, Batman discovers that Stirk has been cooking and drinking heart juice, Stirk chooses a new place to hide his next body since he likes to create confusion for the police, he appears as a beautiful young woman in order to lead a security guard back to his place, Batman is still at the apartment when they arrive (Why? Batman's just been standing there this entire time with Stirk out on the loose???), Stirk tells Batman the security guard is Stirk, Batman believes him, Stirk uses the opportunity to shoot Batman in the leg and then knock him out, He ties Batman up and reveals his powers to him, he hypnotizes Batman to learn his darkest fear and discovers its watching innocents be harmed, so Stirk decides to murder the security guard in front of Batman, but Batman breaks free and takes him down, brings him to Arkham and learns that Stirk has a "severe hypothalmic disorder" causing his psi-powers and his insanity, and we see Stirk in his cell, now terrified by images of the Batman that he keeps seeing in the shadows.
Love this issue for Stirk and for Mitchell's inks over Breyfogle's pencils, but I'm disappointed by the characterization of Batman.
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Post by shaxper on May 26, 2014 19:16:14 GMT -5
One of the more difficult debates I keep having with myself as I continue this review thread is how much attention to give to other members of the Bat-family. For example, I still can't believe I neglected to include Dick Grayson's transformation out of the Robin costume and into the first (horrific) Nightwing costume in the pages of the New Teen Titans a few years back. It's for that reason that I'm including the following review, worthless as it proved to be:
Suicide Squad #23
"Weird War Tales"
writers: John Ostrander and Kim Yale pencils: Luke McDonnell inks: Karl Kessel letters: Todd Klein colors: Carl Gafford editor: Robert Greenberger
Grade: D
I've never read Suicide Squad before, and this issue did little to entice me to read more. The writing was solid, and Amanda Waller was clearly still intriguing at this point, not yet the over-played bad guy you're tired of loving to hate, but the characters seem ridiculous to me, in appearance, abilities, and overall characterization. Maybe I just caught the wrong issue, as this one is largely flashing back to Invasion as opposed to giving sincere attention to the team and is full of continuity references that I do not understand, but I was so bored that I actually chose not to finish this issue.
I picked this issue up because it's the first cameo appearance of Oracle (who will later prove to be Barbara Gordon, though I wonder if that had been decided yet). The emphasis, though, is on the word cameo, as it turns out that I pushed through this issue just to arrive at one single panel in which one of the team members is using a computer that suddenly states:
Hel-lo. I am O-RA-CLE. Is any-one pres-ent?
Apparently, I paid $11 for that one panel.
Not sure I'm really keen on following up with this series to see Oracle in action, but I'll check back for #38, where her identity is finally revealed, and #48, which I believe is also a key issue for her.
No plot synopsis. Just not worth it.
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Post by shaxper on May 26, 2014 19:18:19 GMT -5
Batman #427 It's now obvious to me why I didn't know that Jason Todd's death was conducted by phone-in vote until I joined this discussion board. My copy of Batman #427 holds no indication of a phone-in vote at all. Fortunately, I happen to have a second (direct market) copy, which is a tad bit different. Check it out: Both state, "Robin finds his mother. And waiting is the Joker, planning a revenge that is swift, violent, terrible. Can Robin survive?" Yet the final portion that states, "You will Decide. Details on inside back cover" is conveniently covered by a bar code on the newsstand edition. Sure enough, while the back cover of the direct market edition contains the infamous ad with the two numbers to call, the newsstand edition's back cover ad is for "Mindscape's instant win game," which clearly has nothing to do with the phone-in vote. I don't know if this difference is common knowledge or not, but I wasn't aware of it until now. All this time, I thought I'd just been dense for failing to note this in my numerous re-reads of Death in the Family as a child. Anyway, on to the story: "A Death in the Family, Chapter 3" writer: Jim Starlin pencils: Jim Aparo inks: Mike Decarlo letters: John Costanza colors: Adrienne Roy asst. editor: Dan Raspler editor: Denny O'Neil Grade: B- Jason's finally doing a little better after being turned into a troubled super-dick in the previous issue. With Bruce's guidance, we see a genuinely good natured kid who is more hurt and confused than angry. While it was frustrating to see him act so stupidly when watching Batman fight to the death with his potential mother, wondering which to save (surely he must have known Bruce wouldn't seriously hurt her and must be acting with good reason!), he quickly made the right decision to help Bruce. By the end, the two almost seem to have a bond between them for the first time as Bruce is able to cheer up Jason, who then happily declares "Let's get our tails in gear, man! Ethiopia, here we come!" Somehow, this pep talk seemed earned, and Jason's joy did not come off as campy. It's nice to see Starlin giving Jason a fair shake for once, treating him as a generally good kid who's just struggling with a lot of emotional baggage. Of course, though, this is really Bruce's story, as Mignola's cover to #426 so clearly conveyed. Bruce is trying to keep Jason on the right path and guide him to safe harbors. This little moment of bonding at the end of Chapter 3 gives him the sense that everything's going to be okay with Jason, ultimately setting him up for a greater disappointment by the end of the next chapter than if he'd just been watching Jason rapidly descend into tragedy the entire time. Bruce's quest to save Jason, and the guilt and sense of responsibility that must come from failing in that task, are the real center of this story, as well as the allure of Winnick's modern-day ressurected Jason Todd/Red Hood, whose greatest power is his ability to constantly remind Bruce of his greatest failure (failing to guide Jason away from the dark side even more than failing to save him from death). Whoops. It looks like I fell asleep at the wheel and missed the Batman and Detective annuals for this year. Detective Annual #1 would have been Batman's first meeting with Lady Shiva, who reappears in this issue. Prior to that, she was a character in the Richard Dragon kung fu series. I wonder if reintroducing her (TWICE now) was the result of a heavy handed push by O'Neil, who created the character. Lady Shiva will continue to get pushed on us throughout O'Neil's tenure, training Tim Drake in two years' time and later rehabilitating Batman after Knightfall. I don't recall ever feeling like she'd actually earned a place in the Bat title, though. Even as a kid, the character felt forced upon me. Did we really think Shiva got captured by those terrorists? We'd been told since last issue that she was a terrorist trainer. Why did Starlin expect to surprise us by later revealing this was a ruse? Come to think of it, why was Jason surprised by this revelation? So here's the big question this issue always leaves me asking: Why hasn't Batman been trying to take down international terrorists until now? He's clearly able to do it, yet he's only willing to for the sake of making Jason happy. Somehow that doesn't sit right with me. He explains at the end of the issue that terrorism isn't against the law in Lebanon, which would seemingly explain why he doesn't normally interfere, but then that also means he's willing to violate the laws of another nation and risk a diplomatic incident (and possibly incur terrorist retribution against the United States) just so that he can make Jason happy by helping him find his mother. Really though, why did he have to attack the terrorists (and with such brutality)? Couldn't he have shown up, surrendered, talked with Shiva, and then fought his way out if necessary? After all, Batman knew (or at least strongly suspected) that the kidnapping had been a ruse and that Shiva was their leader/trainer. For a guy who spent most of his run exploring the ethics of crossing the line as a vigilante, Starlin has Batman jumping all over that line in this issue without giving it a second thought. Gotta love how the other terrorists immediately (incorrectly) identify Bruce and Jason by the head coverings they wear. I don't recognize my Western friends by the color and pattern on their t-shirts. Someone needs to explain to Starlin that even Islamist extremists have faces. It's not a bad issue until we get to the Joker...and then I get angry. I have a real problem with pushy writers with too little oversight throwing their weight around with legacy characters. It pisses me off when Grant Morrison does it, and it definitely pisses me off that Starlin did so much of it here. First, he decided that Batman shouldn't have a Robin. Now he's changing the Joker into some boring, grounded villain who cracks exactly one joke in this chapter (that's one more than in the previous two), is entirely motivated by money rather than insanity or compulsion, and he has Joker looking like a normal person (with normal hair and skin) for this entire issue (albeit with an elongated chin) pursuing a mundane goal with absolutely no dramatic flair to accompany it. He's stripped the Joker of all his imaginative comic book flair and made him BORING. I'm glad that he at least takes away the make-up for the infamous crowbar scene in the next chapter. Of course, it's also possible that this IS the Joker's natural skin color. The Killing Joke aside, had any writer or artist ever weighed in on what the Joker's natural skin color was prior to this issue? It would be exceptionally disappointing if Starlin were suggesting that Joker is a normal looking and normal acting guy once his bank accounts are low and the facade is subsequently removed. Interesting to note that, when Batman flashes back to explain his recent history of problems with Jason, he completely leaves out the Felipe incident (which was our first major clue in Batman #424). It seems that Starlin would rather depict Jason as angry and confused for no clear reason now (beyond the loss of his parents), as opposed to slowly stepping down the road to tragedy as a result of falling out on the wrong side of superhero ethics. So, just as I still don't understand what Jason's dad (a stooge for Two-Face) ever would have been doing in contact with an Israeli secret agent and an international terrorist trainer, I'm completely lost as to what a struggling back alley abortion doctor (Sheila Haywood) would have been doing in cahoots with the Joker. Why would either of them have ever sought out the other? What's up with Aparo having characters practically tripping over each-other's personal space in this issue? take a look at page 2, last panel, and page 3, second to last panel. People keep standing over Jason in really weird ways. The first time around, Aparo draws Bruce from an angle that would seem to have him literally bending over Jason's left shoulder and, the second time around, Jason is actually stepping out of the way in order for us to be able to see Sharmin Rosen behind him. The plot synopsis in one ridiculously long sentence: Batman and Robin infiltrate a terrorist camp in Lebanon in search of Shiva Woosen while Batman flashes back on the troubled story of Jason Todd up to this point, they were told Shiva was captured by these terrorists (though Batman suspects otherwise), the Joker visits Shiela Haywood (the third and final candidate for being Jason's real mother), threatening to expose her questionable past to her employers if she doesn't provide him with medical supplies to finance his criminal undertakings, meanwhile Batman and Robin kick more terrorist butt for a few pages until Shiva reveals herself as their trainer, she knocks out Robin before he notices her, she challenges Batman to a fight as a means of testing her own abilities and proves a capable opponent, Jason wakes up, sees them fighting, debates who to help, and ultimately decides to aid Batman, they take her down, tie her up, give her truth serum (which bothers Batman's conscience more than the far bigger ethical concerns I outlined in this review), discover she had no children, and decide to pursue Sheila Haywood in Ethiopia next. Watch out! She's conveniently in league with the Joker at the exact moment that you are seeking her out. No, really. It's totally believable that things would have accidentally worked out in that way. And, talk about the beginnings of Modern Age excessive decompression -- you could cut out chapters 2 and 3 of this story entirely and NOTHING would change. Why not have Jason rule out the first two candidates right away and wrap up this story in four or five densely plotted parts as opposed to making it a drawn out and unfocused seven part story.
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Post by shaxper on May 26, 2014 19:23:14 GMT -5
Batman #427 (continued)
"A Death in the Family, Part 4" writer: Jim Starlin pencils: Jim Aparo inks: Mike DeCarlo letters: John Costanza colors: Adrienne Roy asst. editor: Dan Raspler editor: Denny O'Neil
grade: A-
Reading A Death in the Family has been a deflating experience for me. This was one of my favorite stories of all time as a kid; I read it again and again, knew every panel. So, coming back to it as an adult and seeing how flawed it truly is has been pretty upsetting for me. Imagine then my surprise when arriving at the moment of Jason's death in this chapter moved me more than it ever did before.
Yeah, Cei-U's gonna roast me for this one.
I'd read this story so many times that I'd become desensitized to it, but going through it again, expecting less from it than ever before, Jason really surprised me in the end. I'd gotten so used to Starlin painting him in such an unflattering light that seeing his death as the sum total of repeated decisions to trust in and protect a mother who didn't deserve him just floored me. All Jason really wanted was a mom, and he sacrificed everything with blind love for that cause. That really touched me.
The verdict is still out on Dr. Haywood. I can't decide whether her actions are entirely unrealistic or too disturbingly real after all. All mothers certainly aren't saints, and a woman who'd willingly turned her back on an infant she never planned to have, who was raised by the man that left her and the woman he left her for, and who fought hard to pull herself out of the depths, resorting to moral slips and white collar crimes to sustain her, just might be willing to throw away the son that was never hers in order to get the Joker off her back and protect the career she'd fought so hard to attain. I suppose I can buy that.
It's nice to see the Joker act a little more like himself in this issue, finally appearing with the traditional white face, green hair, and red lips in time to bash Robin in, but it's incredibly disturbing to see just how random Jason's death is. Again, this is not the Joker from The Killing Joke who sadistically wounds one person in order to emotionally break another. This guy didn't even consider the repercussions when beating Jason with a crow bar. When Dr. Haywood asks what Batman will do when he discovers the that the Joker has beaten Jason with a crow bar, the Joker says, "Hadn't thought of that...He's a vengeful one, that Batman. This could get a bit sticky."
Again, Starlin's Joker is all about the pragmatics. He kills Jason to eliminate the evidence that he beat him with a crow bar, not to get back at Batman or to finally deal the fatal blow he's been wanting for years. This is just business; nothing more.
The minor details:
Aparo loses me at times in this chapter. That's blasphemy, even to me, but there are truly panels in this chapter that bug me. The excessive pouty faces on page 23, the weird reversing of angles and ensuing disorientation between the 4th and 5th panels on page 24, the entirely unnecessary shot of the alarm clock on page 26, the Joker's weird face leering at nothing in particular on page 27, and it seems to me that the beating on page 26 could have been more powerful (even being depicted off panel) with a looser, more inventive panel arrangement. Otherwise though, he did a damn fine job as usual. Too bad DeCarlo couldn't do more to compliment his pencils, but (after all), it's DeCarlo.
Why does a camp full of starving refugees pay absolutely no attention to two well-dressed white Americans moving amongst them? You'd think someone would beg or at least stare and wonder what they're up to.
What in the world is Bruce referring to when he preaches, "Once again, the world didn't listen in time. The same mistakes were repeated"? I thought it was just a famine that struck Ethiopia around this time. You don't really prepare for those.
When Jason meets his mother for the first time, and she looks completely thrown, the following occurs to me for the first damn time in this story:
Why didn't Jason just call?
He could have weeded through the candidates in seconds. Granted, Rosen and Woosen wouldn't have been able to be reached by phone, but he probably could have gotten hold of Dr. Haywood and solved the mystery in a single night, as well as prepared her for the news before his arrival. Maybe she wouldn't have been so quick to toss him to the Joker if she'd had time to adjust and emotionally prepare herself to suddenly be someone's mother.
Starlin's desire to explore international politics has always felt heavy-handed, but the entirely irrelevant starving Ethiopians in secondary focus on so many panels just feels excessive. I suppose Starlin was trying to get his readers to want to help, but then make a story with that being the focus. Don't just randomly insert starving Ethiopians into a story that has nothing to do with them. After all, their story is a little more important than this one, so it seems trivial to keep pursuing Jason's plight when there are hundreds of people outside the tent who are experiencing deaths in the family on a regular basis.
Again, the conveniences in this story are absurd. Joker's meeting with Dr. Haywood just happens to be set at the same time as her reunion with Jason. That wouldn't be so bad if the coincidences of them both being in Ethiopia at the same time and to meet the same person weren't already insulting.
So Bruce was just keeping a mostly assembled Bat copter in the back of his land rover all this time? Couldn't someone see the clearly marked, brightly colored bat symbol through the window?
Okay, I kind of sort of get Dr. Haywood's motivations now, but you think, upon seeing that Jason is Robin, she'd be more like, "Listen, I can take care of this on my own. Trust me, and don't go for help. I'll explain later," rather than serving him up to the Joker, who wouldn't have had any idea he was there otherwise. To be fair though, the worse the actions of Dr. Haywood, the more sympathetic Jason becomes in our eyes for placing his trust in her.
I've got to ask again -- how in the world was Jason going to survive that blast? Based on what we've seen of the alternate panels for the next chapter, Dr. Haywood was going to die from the blast no matter what. Yet, somehow, Jason, who was six feet away from her at the time and already beaten nearly to death, was going to survive?
The plot synopsis in one ridiculously long sentence: Bruce and Jason arrive at a refugee camp in Ethiopia, looking for Dr. Haywood (who, by process of elimination and sloppy detective work, must be Jason's real mother), Jason meets her and hears the sad story of why she never gave a damn that he was alive, Bruce leaves them alone, Dr. Haywood excuses herself for an important meeting, Jason sticks around to see who she's meeting and is amazed to see it's the Joker, they discuss the six truck loads of medical supplies she's going to help him steal, we discover that he plans to replace them with crates full of Joker gas (How can he afford to make those? I thought the whole point of this was that he was broke), Jason runs back to tell Bruce everything, Bruce uses a portable Bat Copter to warn the relief workers about the Joker's plan and makes Jason promise not to take down the Joker on his own (Batman shows an awareness of past history by begging Jason to listen to him just this once, though he missed the foreshadow at the end of chapter 1 that choosing The Joker over Jason will end badly), Jason approaches his mother and offers to help, revealing that he is Robin and changing into costume, she lures him into Joker's clutches, Joker beats him with a crow bar, realizes Batman will want retribution for his doing this, and decides to blow up Robin and his mother in the warehouse to destroy the evidence, Batman intercepts the relief workers but loses the Bat copter in the process, Jason recovers in the warehouse with two minutes left on the detonator, but chooses to untie his mother rather than disarm the bomb, Bruce is driving a slower flatbed truck and finally decides to check on Jason rather than pursue the Joker, Jason's mom has nearly gotten them both out of the warehouse when she discovers the door is locked, the warehouse blows, and Bruce arrives just in time to witness the devastation and exclaim, "JASON!! Oh, my God...Oh, my God...No..."
Really, I was touched, and I didn't expect to be. And, Starlin's disappointing portrayal of the Joker aside, this chapter didn't suffer from the same problems as the previous ones. It made more logical sense, didn't waste time, and was incredibly fair to Jason instead of seeming like it was just in a rush to eliminate an annoying sidekick.
The only problem I see from here is that, in my mind, the story is done. Granted, it would be appropriate to have some falling action (Bruce and Alfred mourning, maybe watching Bruce assemble the monument in the Batcave), but the conflicts of the story (Jason finding his mother, Bruce reigning Jason in) are over. The English teacher in me knows there's no way we should be getting two more full length issues out of this story.
Let's see if the remainder of the storyline is as arbitrary and out of nowhere as I remember it seeming at the time...
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Post by shaxper on May 29, 2014 14:57:50 GMT -5
Detective Comics #594
"Case-Book: The Batman -- Ecstasy" writer: Alan Grant (and John Wagner?) art: Norm Breyfogle letters: Todd Klein colors: Adrienne Roy asst. editor: Dan Raspler editor: Denny O'Neil creator: Bob Kane
Grade: B
First, a few notes on the credits: John Wagner is still being credited as co-writer as of this issue, even though Grant would later state that he left the book many months earlier. Also, Bob Kane's creator credit is back. This seems to come and go as easily as a sense of coherence in O'Neil's Bat Office.
Grant gives us a compelling new villain in this issue, though he won't survive to make a return appearance. Ed Hallen is a stock trader strung up on a permanent ecstasy trip, convinced a voice in his head is making him blow up drug users and dealers, wherever he can find them. It's done quite well, even while the anti-drug message is both heavy-handed and seems a bit absurd (are there instances of people having permanent drug trips? Can ecstasy cause some kind of brain damage that does this??).
A favorite line from this issue:
"I wonder if other people hear voices in their heads? I certainly do. I can hear one now. It's saying, 'I wonder if other people hear voices in their heads? I certainly do.' "
Another pleasant addition to this issue is a playful sarcastic bite in Alfred's exchanges with Batman. The only other time I've seen that in these reviews was in Miller's DKR. Maybe that depiction was common pre-Wein, but this is really the first I'm seeing of it in regular continuity:
"What? Me -- abed at two A.M.? Perish the thought, sir! I often sit around to see if you'll call."
"Will that be all, sir? Or would you perhaps like me to put on my knuckle-dusters, pack my rod, and join you?
Finally, this is the first time that Grant goes for a sense of internal continuity in his run, having Hallen blow up the Ventriloquist's nightclub so that he won't have it when he returns from prison.
Really, the only thing this issue did that I didn't enjoy was introduce Joe Potato, a disfigured detective who makes "potato" jokes at every possible opportunity. Honestly, it was old the first time around ("Mister, you just hired yourself one red-hot potato!"). I sincerely hope he won't be sticking around for the remainder of Grant's run.
And why do writers keep feeling the need to add new partners for Batman to work with? Starlin's given him agent Bundy, and Grant's given him Joe Potato, when he's still got Gordon, Bullock (whenever they decide to bring him back), and any number of detectives we've seen Batman partner with in earlier runs. Can't we just use a few characters consistently rather than constantly add new ones?
The minor details:
while joking with Alfred about asking him to do some illegal computer hacker, Batman jests, "Besides, if you're caught, I know a good lawyer." I don't get the joke. Neither Alfred nor Bruce Wayne are lawyers. Who are they referencing here?
Ed Hallen set off with three sets of explosives, yet he stumbled upon his first set of victims, initially attempting to just run them over. Did he have any plan from the start, or did he make up his targets as he went?
Twice in this issue, the voice gives Hallen a second, less desirable option if he doesn't want to kill others, but we never learn what that other option is. Suicide? Sloppy writing to have never bothered to explain this.
Several times now, we've seen Grant attempt to blur the lines between Batman and the villains he haunts through narration, most recently in having both him and Cornelius Stirk describe joy as tasting like "champagne bubbles in my mouth." In this issue, the narration, attempting to discern if a group of thugs were druggies, appears to belong to Batman, but ends up being the thoughts of Ed Hallen. Wonder if Grant is trying to make some sort of point about Batman here, or if (more likely) he's just being playful for the sake of being playful.
The plot synopsis in one ridiculously long sentence: Ed Hallen tries to run over some apparent druggies with his porsche, Batman intervenes, it becomes obvious that Hallen is taking orders from a voice in his head which instructs him not to make a scene, he claims he simply sneezed and tries to make it up to the thugs by giving them the porsche in front of Batman, Batman is confused by this, a strange man (who turns out to be Joe Potato) shows up and begins firing on the porsche, Batman intervenes, the porsche blows up, Potato explains that he was hired by a mysterious client to prevent Hallen from using three sets of explosives to kill drug users and dealers, Hallen blows up The Ventriloquist's club since he was a notable drug dealer, Batman has Alfred do a backround check on Hallen and discovers that he worked at a stock trading firm, Hallen heads there to blow it up while Batman and Potato head their to stop him, Hallen explains to his ecstasy-using colleagues that the bad trip he took last Saturday never stopped (thus the voice in his head), Hallen reveals (not surprisingly) that he's the one who hired Joe Potato to stop him, Batman and Potato manage to throw Hallen into a safe before he can detonate his final set of explosive, Batman takes down the drug-dealing colleagues, and Potato tries to be cute one final time while talking with the cops and fails miserably.
Love the characterization of Ed Hallen, but Joe Potato was a serious hindrance to this issue.
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Post by shaxper on May 29, 2014 14:59:45 GMT -5
Batman #428
"A Death in the Family, Chapter 5" writer: Jim Starlin pencils: Jim Aparo inks: Mike DeCarlo letters: John Costanza colors: Adrienne Roy asst. editor: Dan Raspler editor: Denny O'Neil created by Bob Kane
Grade: B+
In addition to the numerous other degrees of importance I'm about to attribute to this issue (probably more than many of you are expecting), this issue is also important because it's the first comic I ever read and understood. My mother had purchased two comics for me when I was much younger and unable to understand them, but this is the first one I ever really read. It didn't turn me into a comic fan overnight (it would take the 1989 Batman film to do that in about a year's time), but reading this was certainly a memorable experience.
I'd imagine this was many people's introduction (or reintroduction) to Batman for much the same reason as mine -- we'd heard about Robin's death in the news and wanted to see what was going on. This issue seems to be written primarily with that in mind, since most of the issue is recaps of all that's happened with Jason post-Crisis.
We'll, not exactly.
This is Starlin's carefully revised post-Crisis origin of Jason, tying together events and omitting/revising a lot else to make it look like Jason had been building toward this moment all along. Perhaps the most drastic change is the incredibly different different ending we get to Jason's confrontation with Two-Face (he was grinning along with Batman when he originally made the decision not to seek revenge). Interestingly enough, the whole "Did Jason push Felipe?" bit from Batman #424 is entirely omitted in this retelling.
Starlin still seems entirely unsure what to make of Jason Todd, even at this late point. He attempts to depict his death as being caused by "dark moods" and rebelliousness, but also attributes it to Jason being "too young for this kind of work" (again, Starlin hated the idea of a kid sidekick in general). Yet, it was neither clearly his age nor his rebellious streak that got him into trouble this time.
Fortunately, Starlin shows that he's capable of being merciful to Jason. His epithet, given by his mother, pushes aside the dark, careless, rebellious characterization, and summarizes Jason in this touching way:
...he turned out. To be... such a... good kid. ...All his problems... and he...still...turned out good...
Dr. Haywood would have no way of knowing about any of Jason's problems. I really see this as Starlin talking to us directly. Sort of a, "I hate the idea of Robin and want to kill him, but it was nothing personal against Jason Todd." Of course, I suppose the Joker could have said the same thing.
At the same time, it's disturbing how easily Jason is discarded after this point. He gets a lame funeral, and then there's no time spent on watching Bruce and Alfred grieve, there's no building of the monument, there's no consideration of Jason in any way; we just move on to the Joker's story (which will go on to get all of the next issue. Is this really still the "A Death in the Family" story?). Even if I could get behind Starlin's desire to kill Jason, letting the character go in this way is just insulting. He's been a part of this franchise for the better part of this decade and, before the Crisis, had a lot going for him (and presumably a lot of fan support). He deserved a better farewell than this.
Why I find this issue important:
1. It's the divergence point from the alternate future of Dark Knight Returns. As I posted earlier on in this thread, there was a lot of evidence to suggest that Denny O'Neil initially envisioned the post-crisis Batman as being in the same continuity as DKR, allowing Miller to bookend Batman's career with DKR and Year One. However, in DKR, Batman retired shortly after Jason Todd died, presumably because Jason died. That clearly does not occur here.
2. And yet, this is the beginning of Miller's sociopathic Batman characterization entering the comic. Moench, Collins, Barr, Grant, and even Starlin portrayed Batman as a compassionate character capable of happiness even after Miller's origin and future ending made him incredibly dark and obsessive to the point of possible mental instability. In this issue, Starlin allows Jason's death to be the event that triggers this characterization, particularly in his oft-remembered punching of Superman at the end of this issue. With all the press attracting people to read this issue who probably hadn't stopped in since DKR and Year One, this must have solidified their expectations for Batman as well. Suddenly, he's gone from a relatively traditional characterization to being an obsessive bad ass. At least Starlin makes the transition warranted (in response to Jason's death, to his being the indirect cause of, rather than the solution to, the death of an innocent, and, perhaps, to realizing that crime fighting isn't some game to be enjoyed with a young, brightly colored partner).
It's also worth noting that Bruce chooses not to allow Alfred to tell Dick that Jason's dead. "No help from now on. That's the way I want it." Starlin is pushing to make Batman solitary and moody, his very reason for killing Robin off in the first place. It's worth noting that he still works these lines into the alternate version of this issue where Jason lives.
3. I'm sure I'll get disagreement on this one because what follows is admittedly a weak argument, but this is the beginning, in my mind, of the Robin assembly line. Dick had to grow up and get replaced after thirty years, but once Jason was killed off, it was a Robin free-for-all. Eventually, some writer or editor was going to seek to give Batman a Robin again, and that role was now disposable. Dick lasted as side-kick for three decades, Jason almost made it through one, Tim was in and out of that role in the 90s (even getting replaced by Stephanie for a short while), and the 2000s gave us Damian Wayne. With Jason's passing, the role ceased to carry a legacy that actually meant something. All of a sudden, anyone could be "The Next Robin" without concern for whether the character was compelling and well-rounded enough to last as Robin in the long run.
The minor details:
Darn gutsy to have put Ayatollah Khomeini into this issue, directly hiring the Joker as Iranian ambassador to the U.S.
Ah, the diplomatic immunity angle again. Starlin just did this five issues back with Felipe and his father, only they were from Columbia. What had been happening in the news that had both Jim Starlin and the writers of Lethal Weapon 2 (hitting theaters a few months later) so obsessed with this topic?
Columbians, Iranians, Lebanese terrorists, the KGB...wow. Starlin really really didn't like foreigners, did he? It's funny that he started turning the spotlight on America's potential enemies in the pages of Batman around the same time that Grant turned the spotlight on America's (and, later, all of Western culture's) atrocities against others in the pages of Detective. Grant distrusts America, and Starlin distrusts everyone else.
Batman reflects upon the Joker and thinks, "I've excused the evils you've done in the past because of your insanity." Yet, as has been discussed at length here, Starlin's Joker is pretty much the least insane Joker we've ever seen. It seems evident that Starlin doesn't like the idea of the Joker anymore than he liked the idea of Robin (neither would seem to belong in a grounded/realistic Batman story, though Heath Ledger would disprove that idea twenty years later). It seems here, though, that Starlin's even more bothered by the seemingly absurd fact that Batman has never done more to permanently stop the Joker. I don't know if I asked this in this thread already or not (I've certainly been thinking it), but I wonder if Starlin wasn't hoping to take out the Joker too with the end of this story. Of course that was never going to stick...especially after the 1989 movie hit theaters.
This cover and the one for next issue are among my favorite comic book covers ever made. If only Mignola had been hired to pencil and ink some actual issues of Batman. At this point, I might take him over the Aparo/DeCarlo team.
The plot in one ridiculously long sentence:
Batman runs through the devastation in search of Jason, recapping Jason's progression from Batman #408 onward with Starlin's own special narrative filter applied, painting Jason as the emotional ticking time bomb that he never actually was until the beginning of this story, he finds Dr. Haywood nearly dead, he recaps the first four chapters of this story in flashback, Dr. Haywood finishes the recap, explaining how Jason saved her and proved what a "good boy" he was, Batman finds Jason dead, hugs him, and carries him off, Joker sells the stolen medical supplies and gets recruited by Ayatollah Khomeini, Bruce starts taking his quest to find Joker more personally, Joker leaves a clue for where Batman can next find him, a small funeral is held for Jason and his mother (only Alfred, Gordon, and Barbara are present), Bruce decides to go it solo from now on, he figures out that the Joker wants to meet him at the United Nations, he goes there and meets Superman, warning him that the new Iranian ambassador has full diplomatic immunity (we already know who it is), Batman loses control of himself and decks Superman (breaking his own knuckles while not hurting Supes at all), and the Iranian ambassador is (not at all surprisingly) revealed to be The Joker.
I loved the final moment with Dr. Haywood recalling Jason's final moments and summing up his goodness, and I respected Starlin's attempt to weave Jason's post-Crisis appearances into a consistent character progression (apparently the lie stuck. People still believe it), but I feel Jason's story lacks true resolution and completely derails with the Joker's becoming an ambassador. That belonged in a different story.
A strong, but strongly flawed issue.
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Post by shaxper on May 29, 2014 15:52:57 GMT -5
Detective Comics #595
"Our Man in Havana" writer: Alan Grant (and John Wagner?) pencils: Irv Novick inks: Steve Mitchell colors: Adrienne Roy letters: Todd Klein asst. editor: Dan Raspler editor: Denny O'Neil
Grade: D-
Yuk.
So this issue is an obligatory Invasion tie-in (I'm so glad DC has toned down these tie-ins in recent years), and a phoned-in effort is the result. Breyfogle skipped out on this issue entirely, and after delivering a semi-thoughtful introduction (even though the English teacher in me caught the sloppy parallel structure that I wouldn't normally expect from him) Grant pretty much goes for plot points and easy dialogue with absolutely no creative flare showing anywhere in this story. Alien invasions are an even poorer fit for Grant than they are for Batman (and both he and Maxwell Lord too willingly concede on that latter point in this story).
The truly sad part is that, while Breyfogle is cutting class and Grant is turning in D work he wrote the night before, Irv Novick puts surprising effort into this story. If you've been reading these reviews from the beginning, then you probably know that I absolutely detest Novick's work, yet this issue wasn't bad. It wasn't good, mind you...just not bad. There were maybe two semi-lousy panels in the entire story. I consider that a triumph for Irv. This is probably, in some small part, due to Steve Mitchell's inks, which actually make Novick's Batman look good at times.
This issue also contains DC Bonus Book #11. I honestly can't believe they were still doing these try-out stories. Last time around, both the art and writing were abysmal. This time around, the art is just pretty bad (about a degree below Novick on a normal day), and the writing is truly a joke. Writer Jeff O'Hare literally lost me on panel two, as panel one shows Batman beating up a thug, and panel two says "Meanwhile..." What? We're transitioning to a new scene already? What was the point of showing us the first one?
An honest question: Did DC actually gain any serious talent from any of these bonus books? It seems to me that they only used writers and artists that they already had too many doubts about to place on a regular title.
Really, all that's worth discussing in this issue is Denny O'Neil's initial response to the Jason Todd vote in the letters column, which was strangely absent at the end of Batman #428 (all we got there was a quick note from asst. editor Dan Raspler asserting that he'd voted for Jason to live). There are a few passages in it that are worth discussing:
Cynic that I am, I, and most of the rest of the DC staff, thought our audience would vote negatively if only to see if we'd dare to go through with killing yet another major character."
Yet, in the postscript to the Death in the Family tpb, O'Neil claims that he voted for Jason to live and didn't want him to die. Yet the vote was his idea, and he suspected fans would kill Jason off if given the chance. I suppose it's possible that he put his personal opinions aside for the sake of the fans, but it sure looks like he only claimed to want to save Jason so as not to appear as the bad guy in this situation.
And, at 7:45, it looked like he might make it, with 5,221 for him and 5,259 against. Only 38 calls difference.
There must have been a last-minute surge of Jason-haters. When, at 8:30, I finally spoke to a human being...the final count was 5,271 to 5,343.
An indication of how close the vote really was. I think it's important to bear in mind that, by the end of Batman #427, Starlin had made Jason thoroughly unlikable and unsaveable, had established a running theme that Jason was headed down a path of destruction, and had put him in a situation in which he had no reasonable means of surviving. Starlin really stacked the deck and, additionally, the phone number was only made available to loyal comic book fans buying in direct market shops, not the general masses who would be more likely to prevent a legacy character from dying. With all of that, the end difference was still only 74 votes.
O'Neil goes on to claim that his reasons for doing this were to try out the phone technology and to do something no one had ever done before, yet we know that isn't the whole story. Starlin had been begging for Jason's death for a long while now, and O'Neil himself is far too quick to talk about taking Batman back to his roots and the excitement/unpredictability of separating Batman from Robin after 48 years. Let's also keep in mind that, when Denny was writing Batman, they were solo stories, with Dick away in college. More and more, I'm convinced that O'Neil wanted Robin gone just as much as Starlin did.
The plot synopsis (if you really care): Batman goes to Cuba to fight the invading aliens, he flashes back to turning down Maxwell Lord's request for him to help the Justice League with the invasion (both he and Lord seemed to agree he had no place in a battle against aliens), Batman goes on patrol, a routine robbery results in the victims turning alien weaponry on their attackers, Batman intervenes, they're aliens, he figures out that they were smuggling in alien weapons that had come from Cuba, we flash forward to Batman in Cuba, and he takes down the bad guys and blows up the cigar factory out of which they were shipping the weapons, leaving Batman to wonder how he's going to get home (his helicopter blew up in the beginning).
Worthless story aside from O'Neil's comments in the letters column.
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Post by shaxper on May 29, 2014 15:53:42 GMT -5
Batman #429
"A Death in the Family, Chapter 6" writer: Jim Starlin pencils: Jim Aparo inks: Mike DeCarlo letters: John Costanza colors: Adrienne Roy asst. editor: Dan Raspler editor: Denny O'Neil
Grade: C
The final chapter in the A Death in the Family storyline feels no more a part of it than the previous chapter did. While this supposedly final confrontation with the Joker stems from what he did to Jason, it's an entirely different story with its own plot structure. Yet the "Death in the Family" title probably helped it sell a ton more copies, and DC seemed to be so confident of this fact that they jacked the cover price up to $1.00 for this issue only, even while it contains no additional pages.
For what it's worth, the only chapters in Death in the Family that were actually integral to Jason's death were Chapters 1, 4, and the first half of Chapter 5. Chapters 2-3 are unnecessary filler, and the second half of 5 and now all of 6 are an entirely different story.
It's interesting that, in the very storyline in which the post-crisis Batman continuity finally clearly diverges from that of DKR (Batman doesn't retire when Jason dies), Starlin seems to be making a supreme effort to finally align Batman's characterization with that of the protagonist we saw in DKR. This Batman is full of rage and a thirst for revenge as a result of Jason's death, and his ideological confrontation with Superman in this issue (as Superman is hired by the president to make him follow the law, which, as Batman points out, is not the same as justice) seems to be taken directly from DKR, especially as Batman begins referring to Supes as "The Boyscout."
There's also an attempt to align this story with The Killing Joke as Batman is finally brought to that point he sought to avoid in TKJ in which one of them must kill the other. The alignment is also clearly there as Batman instructs Joker to "give it up," and he replies by pleading, "I can't! I can't! I CAN'T!" which is completely reminiscent of the scene in TKJ when Batman offers Joker a chance to change and Joker sadly replies that it's far too late for him. I must admit this last bit felt very heavy handed here, as Batman must have said "Give it up!" to the Joker a billion times by now, though it's also true that Starlin made it clear both seemed to sense the climactic nature of this struggle before it even began. They both understood this one is to the death with an eerie level of connectivity (the Joker even seeming to look at Bruce Wayne and know who he really is and what he's about to do).
Starlin tries to do some justice to Jason again in this issue, but this time it's over the top and smacks of insincerity on Starlin's part as the following conversation ensues:
Superman: He seemed like a really nice kid.
Batman: He was. Jason was the best.
Since when? I really liked the kid, and even I can't buy that. Of course, Starlin never showed us the good times between Jason and Bruce. Collins gave us the origin, Starlin fast forwarded, left Jason out for most of the run, and then did everything possible to make him troubled and doomed to die. I'd like to believe that the Mike W. Barr stories in Detective, featuring a generally happy and good kid (later revealed to have tremendous pain and anger carefully buried deep inside), fits between the origin and Starlin's run -- the "good" years that would allow Bruce to see Jason as "the best" prior to all of this happening. But there's no sense that anyone was trying to merge those depictions of Jason together. Once Starlin came onboard, Barr's depiction of Jason seemed to get erased from existence.
Aparo's Joker gets a lot more ridiculous in this issue. I swear his chin grew several inches since the previous issue, and that face that constantly leers at nothing in particular is more odd than it is disturbing.
Okay, so the Joker flagrantly brags to Batman that he killed Jason when his entire motivation for doing so in Batman #427 was to keep Batman from knowing he had beaten him with the crow bar so that he could avoid Batman's retribution. I suppose it's possible that The Joker suspected that Batman was there because he already knew, but it's far more reasonable to assume Batman had come because Joker was going to be delivering that "speech" to the United Nations.
Starlin still isn't writing a funny/clever Joker. His speech to the U.N., right before he tries to kill them all, isn't his style at all as he preaches quite seriously about feeling disrespected, abused and belittled by society. Really the only thing close to a gag he delivers in this issue goes as follows:
Batman: You always know the exact wrong thing to say, don't you?
Joker: That's what makes me so special.
and soon after:
Joker: Okay, Let's Mambo!! Gone! I hate it when he does that. But he does make life worth living. I'm all A-tingle. Won't be able to sleep a wink. Can't wait...
This second bit really sounds like a hack trying to write the Joker without having the least bit grasp on his outlook and sense of humor. "Let's mambo!!" is the best you can give him while he's trying to gun down Batman?
Starlin's commentary against the U.S. is so one-sided that it's absurd here. CIA director Ralph Bundy's advice to Batman is particularly pathetic; I can't imagine a patriotic agent actually speaking these lines:
Guys like us should just do our jobs and let the big shots do theirs. They know what's doing and they say hands off Iran's new U.N. ambassador! Understand?
The idea of the U.N. (which Starlin seems to carelessly blur with the U.S. govt. here) allowing the Joker in as a diplomat AND not subjecting him to any security check whatsoever (he had two giant metal canisters strapped to his chest!) while also somehow having security lax enough to allow the Joker's henchmen to plant bombs throughout the chamber, just seems utterly absurd to me. As much as Starlin came across as a raging liberal in "The Cult" (and don't get me wrong; I'm kind of a raging liberal, myself), his paranoid view of foreign governments and belief that the U.S. coddles and empowers them to this extent feels like the perspective of some extreme right wing dude wearing camouflage and living in a shed in the woods.
And speaking of "The Cult," though Starlin never once mentioned the events of that story in the Batman title (unless his reference to having been in the sewer on a recent mission way back in #421 was supposed to be acknowledging the story), he now has Bruce mention that he's still recovering from what Deacon Blackfire did to him. AGGHHH. That single line, spoken in a single panel, completely messes up the post-crisis Batman continuity I'd constructed up to this point. Starlin's internal continuity doesn't work all because of this reference to the events of "The Cult" having happened recently. Check out the continuity again:
__________________________________________________ ______________ The Post-Crisis Batman Timetable
Year 1 -- The Year 1 storyline. Additionally, the replacement commissioner at the end of "Year One" is fired or forced to retire Year 1 -- Batman switches to the yellow chest symbol
Year 2 -- The Year Two storyline
Year 3 -- Dick is taken in by Bruce at age 12, becomes Robin at age 13
Year 3-9 -- Most of Batman's rogues gallery is active for some time prior to Dick's retirement, but presumably not until after the events of Year Two (since it's implied that Reaper is Batman's first supervillain), including Two Face, Penguin, and Joker.
Year 9 -- The first Robin is retired and presumed dead by the general public, at age 19 after 6 years with Batman and an implied long history of repeated confrontations with members of the rogues gallery
Year 10 -- Bruce takes in Jason. Dick attends one year of college, drops out, becomes Nightwing, and "started a new life as leader of" the New Teen Titans (this seems to imply that he formed the team after becoming Nightwing and never led it as Robin).
Year 10.5 -- Jason becomes Robin six months after Bruce takes him in (Dick confronts Batman about Jason being the new Robin 18 months after his retirement; the preface for Death in the Family states that Jason became Robin 18 months after Dick retired).
Year 11.5 -- the present day of Batman #416, which takes place one year after the confrontation between Dick and Bruce over Jason becoming Robin.
This makes the current events of Batman take place in Year 11.5 or Year 12, but "The Cult, Book 4" explicitly states that Batman has now been active for ten years. The only way this works is if "The Cult" takes place at the beginning of Jason's career. __________________________________________________ _______________
...of course, Starlin just killed that explanation with a single entirely unnecessary line from Batman.
The final climactic battle in this issue between Batman and Joker, the one that Starlin has spent the last issue and a half building toward, that he seemed to feel was so important to depict that it usurped the need to give any closure to Jason's final fate, ends far too quickly and randomly. Batman literally touched Joker ONCE, abandoned him when it looked like he might kinda' sorta' be done for, and then acknowledged immediately after that he didn't really expect him to be dead. What the heck was the point of all that? I've previously mentioned that I suspect Starlin was looking to off the Joker along with Robin (both being fantastic aspects of the Batman mythos that didn't fit his grounded vision of Batman), but this is the lamest, half-ass "I'm killing him, but I'm really not killing him if anyone wants to bring him back" ending possible. I wonder if he and O'Neil had a discussion about this and O'Neil forced him to pull his punch with the Joker, or if this was a decision he reached on his own. Clearly, the Joker was too profitable a character to get rid of, especially with the Burton movie about to hit screens.
For what it's worth, Denny O'Neil posts the exact same statement from the letter column of Detective #595 into this issue's letter column, again giving an initial reaction to the vote to kill Jason off.
All in all, this is a nice issue if you were a fan of DKR and Killing Joke and were waiting to see those works have an impact upon regular continuity. To me, though, this felt like something that was shamelessly and obligatorily thrown out there to keep the fan boys who loved those works buzzing, not a work that possesses any true integrity of its own. Mignola's cover and that one haunting Aparo image of a bullet-riddled Joker attempting to laugh aside, this "final" Joker story did absolutely nothing for me.
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Post by shaxper on May 29, 2014 15:54:33 GMT -5
Detective Comics #596
"Video Nasties" writer: Alan Grant (and John Wagner?) pencils: Edwardo Barreto inks: Steve Mitchell letters: Todd Klein colors: Adrienne Roy asst. editor: Dan Raspler editor: Denny O'Neil creator: Bob Kane
Grade: C+
It's interesting that, in this issue, rather than give the formal credits at the beginning, they simply list all the names of the people involved, followed by the word "present." Did they mean to imply that Bob Kane was actually present and somehow involved in the making of this issue? I doubt it.
Okay, so I'm disappointed. Based on the covers of this and the next issue, I honestly thought Grant was going to try to salvage Moench's Film Freak, a great character concept that was handled poorly. Of course, I should have realized that Grant hasn't handled a single villain he hasn't himself created in these pages (though that will eventually change with Etrigon and the Clayfaces). For the most part, Grant's been trying to give us sicker, more realistic villains, and the villain in this issue certainly fits that profile -- a porn rental store owner who organizes and films senseless beatings (and murders?) for profit. It's a good idea (the story, not the business), but beyond the initial shock and repulsion that people might indeed pay to see something like this, I didn't find too much to love about this issue.
I was, however, certainly bothered by portions of it. Here are the minor details:
-The first victim is a college kid hanging out in an all-night classic cartoon marathon festival with his friends. Now, I can accept that he was there in order to do research for his paper, but you're telling me his friends just happen to go there for fun on a regular basis? Clearly, they didn't come to keep him company or they would have left with him. And, of course, it's insultingly convenient that he's exploring the link between cartoon violence and real world violence just as he's about to be videotaped while being beaten for the viewing entertainment of others.
-Is crime in Gotham really so rampant that a bunch of thugs could just start beating a guy in an alley that's clearly visible from the road? Maybe it really is time for Batman to retire DKR-style if he's having that little success in striking fear into the criminal element.
-Whenever Batman finds a possible clue and says, "Probably nothing--just a long shot," you know this is going to be that 1 out of 100 times that the long shot works out. It probably wouldn't bother most readers, but I hate cheap narrative conveniences like this, and I think Grant is too excellent a writer to be leaning upon them.
- Grant suddenly attempts to explore the relationship between Bruce and Alfred, and I don't care for what he comes up with. Here's the conversation they have:
Bruce: What is it about us, Alfred? What makes us such easy prey for violence and depravity?
Alfred: I'm only a butler, sir. Far be it for me to play the psychologist...besides, I'm sure you understand the repulsions--and attractions--of violence far better than I ever will. You are, after all, something of a specialist on the subject!
Bruce: I serve JUSTICE, Alfred. I meet violence with whatever it takes to overcome it. I take no pleasure in it!
Alfred (thinking to himself): Take no pleasure in it? Hmph!
Bruce (thinking to himself): Only a butler? Hmph!
I don't enjoy this antagonistic relationship. Really, I just think Grant should stay away from Bruce's head. He's had little interest in Bruce up until now, spending far more time on introducing fascinating villains with Batman serving as little more than the hand of justice that finally puts them away. I like Grant better that way. Every Copper Age writer seems to feel some compulsion to get into Bruce's head, and too many writers are trying it without the proper skill and sense of restraint. I'm willing to bet that Grant's work on Shadow of the Bat will be far stronger because it gives him the luxury of not having to focus on Batman at all.
-Does Batman normally employ both Alfred and his Bruce Wayne identity in his detective work? I'd imagine it wouldn't take long for this to thoroughly compromise his dual identity, especially when the wealthiest man in Gotham pays off a shoe store clerk for information on another customer and then goes to a porn rental store asking about ninja action flicks.
-Of course the villain has an unusual tell-tale deformity to allow Bruce to easily track him down. Another lame convenience.
-Why does Bruce decide to wait for the cameraman to make another move and then catch him in the act? This guy is just a shmoe looking to make some money, not a hardened criminal. A quick Batman shakedown would scare him straight and get him to surrender the information about his employer without taking the risk of allowing him to harm another innocent victim before Batman intercedes.
-What's up with the obligatory boxing match scene? Are we really supposed to believe Bruce finds the time to drop in at the local inner city boys' club on a regular basis when we've never heard of him doing so before? The lines about the benefits and anti-violence purpose of youth boxing feel absurdly heavy handed and (once again) convenient to this story.
-Are we going to find out next issue what happened in that last panel, or are we just supposed to assume it's the effects of a concussion?
Losing Breyfogle again for this issue is a sincere disappointment. O'Neil claims he'll be returning in a few more issues (wonder what the prolonged absence is about?). Barreto isn't bad, but he's certainly not as good, and those blank backgrounds (particularly on page 5) bugged me.
I'm starting to become a fan of Steve Mitchell. I really like the heavy shadows he lays onto Barreto's art (he did this for Novick last issue, as well), which is never over the top. It's the kind of visual that's so thoroughly Batman -- it wouldn't work in most other comics. Inking is one of those aspects of comics I still haven't developed a full appreciation for yet, so it's nice to now have two inkers I know I like (Alfredo Alcala being the first and primary one).
O'Neil talks about the Burton movie in the letters column this time. It's the first time it's been mentioned by him in these books (as far as I've noticed). At this point, it's about to begin shooting in England. Surprising to me, though, was that, when listing the primary cast, O'Neil stated that Vicki Vale was being played by Sean Young. I guess there was a last minute change? Edit: did some research. Young broke her arm early on in filming and was dropped. She tried out for Catwoman in the second film and was turned down. After that, she apparently made her own Catwoman costume and attempted to confront Burton and Keaton while wearing it.
Also in the letters column, O'Neil complains that Detective doesn't get anywhere near as many letters as Batman (and seems to be insulting the quality of letters he's therefore forced to print here. Nice, Denny). It's sad that this probably indicates that Batman is strongly outselling Detective at this point (which has frequently been the case for decades). I hope O'Neil doesn't accept this as proof that spectacles including poorly rebooted origins and meaningless deaths are more profitable than consistent quality art and writing. Eh, he probably believed that from the start anyway...and it's sadly true anyway.
Oh well...
The plot synopsis in one ridiculously long sentence: a college student is watching a classic cartoon movie marathon in a theater with his friends as research for a paper he is writing, he leaves and is assaulted by hooded men, beaten, and video taped while it occurs, Batman sees the struggle from the Batmobile and intercedes, the cameraman escapes, Batman reviews the video tape of the beating with Gordon and a nameless detective and finds a clue that might be a "long shot," the cameraman returns to the adult video store that he works at and reports back to the man who hired him to make the film, the employer is angry but gives him one last chance, all while someone who is not shown practices boxing in the next room while claiming to be tougher than Schwartzenegger, Stallone, and Norris, Bruce and Alfred debate about using violence to deliver justice, Bruce figures out from the video that the cameraman has a built up custom alligator boot, he and Alfred investigate local shoemakers who offer that service, Bruce bribes the right one for the name and address of the cameraman, he goes to the adult video store to scope him out and positively identifies him by his boot, decides to catch him in the act later as Batman , goes to the local boysclub to watch kids box and talk about the benefits of boxing, this is somehow interesting enough to be broadcast on local television, where the cameraman's employer watches and mocks the message, the employer then goes into the next room and asks the enormous brute there to make sure Batman doesn't interfere with the next video shoot, Batman interferes with the next video shoot, the brute attacks him, Batman starts to take a beating, and then the sky appears to go crazy in the final panel as Batman remarks, "The sky! What in the name...?" To be continued...
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Post by shaxper on May 29, 2014 15:58:03 GMT -5
Batman #430
"Fatal Wish" writer: Jim Starlin pencils: Jim Aparo inks: Mike DeCarlo letters: John Costanza colors: Adrienne Roy asst. editor: Dan Raspler editor: Denny O'Neil created by: Bob Kane
grade: B+
It's Starlin's final issue, after almost two years on the book, and he still struggling to find a distinct take on Batman in this issue. Whereas the first half of his run took an interest in exploring where the line is in vigilantism, he got a bit too distracted with trying to find reasons to make Jason unlikable/killable, and now he's here at the end, finally finding his Batman.
What he tries to end with is more of that alignment with DKR that we first saw in "The Cult" and began to notice again in the final chapters of "A Death in the Family." Gordon describes Batman as having, "an almost maniacal drive to save innocent lives and punish criminals" in this issue. That's Miller's characterization alright, and when we get to the flashback of Bruce's parents' murder, the panels are taken directly from DKR chapter 1, page 23. They were even watching The Mask of Zorro before the mugging, which was also a DKR contribution.
Later, as Batman takes down the gunman in this story, we get that Miller-style narration in which Batman assesses and predicts the moves that he and his nemesis will make, almost like a computer. An example:
"The smokes pellets will provide all the cover he needs. And their psychological effect on his prey is extremely predictable. First comes anger. Then fear. And finally carelessness."
However, just as in "The Cult," which I called Starlin's "liberal answer to DKR," this Batman is still an altruistic hero despite the rage and cold calculation. He still tries to save the gunman's life in the end. Really, the difference between Starlin and Miller is in Batman's motivations. Miller makes Batman pissed/obsessive. Starlin makes Batman's rage ultimately directed at himself for wishing his parents dead before it happened, and makes his mission to fight crime more a duty of penance, a means of repeatedly telling them he's sorry.
I LOVE that interpretation of the Caped Crusader; it makes the morbid, Gothic mood of the character so much more understandable/appropriate. Miller's character should have become the Punisher, not a dark cloaked soul standing alone amidst dark towers and gargoyles at night. This character has substance (grief is far more interesting than rage) and, most importantly, this character can still be considered a hero, whereas I'm not entirely sure the same could be said for Miller's enraged sociopath.
Still, the modifications Starlin makes to Bruce's origin story really bothered me. I can't imagine Bruce dedicating his life to saying "I'm sorry" to an alcoholic father who hit him. The entire premise of Batman really only works if you can view Thomas and Martha Wayne as the kind of saints that any parents would appear to be in the eyes of a pre-adolescent who lost them too soon. The Bruce I imagine would have blocked out such sordid details about his father and not worked to recollect them later on.
The "I'm sorry, daddy! I didn't mean it!" at the end was too much...it felt more silly than tragic when contrasted against the mature darkness of The Batman. Still, I found most of the rest of the visual contrast in this issue (adult Batman versus childhood Bruce) powerful. Normally, the origin story gets told either on its own or while Bruce is "Bruce". To contrast who Bruce was versus the dark figure that Bruce has truly become felt fresh and powerful to me.
The minor details:
- This real-world villain feels lifted directly out of a Grant story. Grant would have made him more interesting, warped, and reflective of our times though.
- Aparo's surprised faces are beginning to bug me. Page 3, panel 6, in particular, has a face so exaggerated that it looks like the Joker.
- What was the point of the woman trapped in the middle of the road? I didn't understand why the police couldn't just close down the road to get her out, she was never actually shown, and she added nothing to the story, yet she was the major focus when Batman first arrived on the scene.
- Gordon asking, "By the way, is Robin with you tonight?" felt silly to me. Clearly he's not there, and even Starlin has established that Robin doesn't come out on every mission. It makes a nice connection to the previous storyline, but it's an unnatural line of dialogue. Maybe Gordon should have said something like, "Funny, I thought Robin would be with you tonight" or something.
- In my mind, the last issue was all about showing how Jason's death led Batman to become a darker, more Miller-like Batman, but Starlin appears to be backing off from that here, showing a Batman who has always been Miller-like, and yet who can still be a good guy through and through. Too bad the majority of people who stopped in to read DKR and "A Death in the Family" probably didn't bother to read this issue or notice the subtle changes it was going for. With "A Death in the Family" Starlin cemented into public consciousness a Batman that he doesn't actually seem to want.
- On page 7, can a sniper rifle really shoot through a steel door??
- Page 9, the offices of "O'Neil and Raspler: Creative Consultants"
- Batman is beaten far too easily in this issue, constantly missing his mark in a fight with an inexperienced gunman and getting far too blinded by the flash of a gun, wandering around almost drunk and entirely unable to move for nine panels after.
In the letters column, O'Neil is now using the same "From the Den" writeup in Batman and Detective, so there's nothing new there, but he does explain Starlin's (at the time, temporary) departure from the book to begin a "Gilgamesh II" epic saga. Someone posted in this thread a few pages back that Starlin had been fired from DC for killing Robin, which didn't sit right with me at the time and still doesn't (can't find the post right now). Can anyone back-up or clarify this statement?
The Owsley and Byrne issues have all been planned at this point, as well, though I'm surprised that O'Neil refers to John Byrne as "famous horror novelist John L. Byrne." Unless this is a different John Byrne, I had no idea he'd written novels (and what an odd way to introduce him, rather than mentioning Man of Steel or the X-Men).
The plot synopsis in one ridiculously long sentence:
A laid-off banker with a sniper rifle goes to a rooftop to kill innocents before killing himself, Batman intervenes, the Sniper says "I wish you were all dead," which causes Batman to recall his origin (now revised) in which he tells a drunk and abusive Thomas Wayne that he wished he was dead, later prompting Thomas to apologize and reconcile by taking Bruce out to see The Mask of Zorro, after which the fatal mugging occurs, Batman tries to take down the gunman but is unable to stop him from moving into the sightline of the police snipers on the ground, and they kill him.
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Post by shaxper on Jul 21, 2014 3:03:36 GMT -5
Detective Comics #597
"Private Viewing" story: Alan Grant (& John Wagner?) pencils: Eduardo Barreto inks: Steve Mitchell letters: Todd Klein colors: Adrienne Roy asst. editor: Dan Raspler editor: Denny O'Neil
Grade: D-
Bob Kane's creator credit gets dropped just in time for the issue that went horribly wrong. How in the world did we go from an adequate Grant story about a sick underground industry peddling video-recorded beatings to an afterschool special in the span of a single issue? I truly don't understand the absurdly heavy-handed message that comes at the end, when Batman takes the bored rich people who had been paying for these videos to visit a victim from one of the videos in the hospital, at which point we get corny lines like:
"Thank you, Batman! I--I thought he [the video broker] was my friend...but he would have killed me! I'm...sorry."
"Mr. Gaines...I--I think I speak for all of us when I say how...stupid and selfish we've been. I guess I'd never really thought about it before. But seeing you here--like this--made me realize...I'm truly sorry. I'll never do anything like it again."
"That goes for the rest of us, too, Batman. You've really brought home exactly what we were getting involved in. I don't think you have to worry about it ever happening again."
Yeesh. Put aside, for a moment, the fact that extremely wealthy people with attorneys would never be so quick to admit fault, as well as the fact that bored people getting off on a reality video of someone getting beaten would probably seriously get-off on seeing the broken victim in person and the forbidden nature of having the Batman holding them responsible for what they'd done, and then ask yourself EXACTLY WHO IS THIS MESSAGE INTENDED FOR? I don't think this was a sweeping fad in the late '80s or anything. Maybe Grant was going for a broader sense that people need to not be desensitized to each other (there's some missed connection there with the cartoon violence essay assignment that frames the story), but this is never clearly argued. The story preaches hard against paying for videos of people being beaten and fails to activate any deeper awareness beyond that.
In fact, I'm not convinced Grant wrote this ending. It just doesn't match his style, nor do the wealthy people of those final few pages match the clever and smug wealthy people that were threatening to call their lawyers and making up alibis on the fly when Batman busted them a few pages earlier. The credits for this issue oddly credit Grant (and Wagner) for the "story" as opposed to crediting them as "writers." I wonder if someone finished this one for Grant, especially with Denny booting him off the book next issue (the letter column for this issue makes no indication that Grant was supposed to be returning in Detective #601 at this point).
Oh, and you've got to love that O'Neil got the scriptwriter for the Batman film to write the next story arc. Denny is certainly a shameless promoter/salesman first, and an actual editor who concerns himself with the quality and contents of the books he supervises second or third at best. With all the decompressed multi-part storylines coming up (each with their own catchy names and logos), as well as stunts like killing off Jason and now bringing on the scriptwriter for the much anticipated Batman film, I wonder if Denny wasn't the Harbinger of the hype and sales-first mentality that would later plague the comic industry, create a speculator bubble, burst it, and leave the act of reading modern comics as an unsatisfying cocktease experience to this day, almost 25 years later. But I digress..
At this point, Leslie Thompkins appears to be completely out of the Bat-Universe. No one ever mentioned her other than Barr, and now Grant uses an entirely different random doctor to provide the same moral questioning that Leslie would have done in the past while bandaging him up in a hospital rather than in Leslie's clinic.
Last issue was our first hint that Grant was taking Gordon in a direction I disliked, as Batman and a random detective poured over evidence while Gordon sat at his desk and watched. Now, in this issue, Gordon doesn't understand Batman's obvious logic in using one perp to catch the group of larger perps hiring him, yet begrudgingly allows it while haphazardly warning "but if anything goes wrong--if anyone else is hurt--it'll be on YOUR conscience!" This is not the same energetic and committed former detective that functioned as an ally to Batman post-Miller, nor the embodiment of justice and conscience that Gordon was pre-Miller. This is just some lazy desk jockey, and I resent that.
Eduardo Barreto just doesn't seem cut out for this work. It's as if he didn't get the memos, changing the Batmobile once again (Breyfogle just changed it for the second time two issues ago!), and repeatedly drawing Batman with actual eye-holes in his cowl, which makes him look like Zorro and entirely kills the visual power of the character.
And what was up with that first page? It's a variation on the cover, and neither are the actual beginning of the story. It's like Barreto drew a crappier cover that got rejected, so they threw it on the first page. I doubt that's what actually happened, but it's what it seems like.
The bored socialites in this issue, paying big money for big kicks, felt very reminiscent of Nightmares Inc, a group of actors paid by bored socialites to scare them out of their wits. Nightmares Inc. was last employed during Doug Moench's run with Nocturna as their employer.
We never do find out what the darned light in the sky was that cost Batman the battle with Tonka last issue, even though it gets referenced again. Was this simply a concussion symptom that Batman continued to misinterpret after the fact, or did Grant forget to tell us something (or get kicked off the book before he could)?
I will say that I enjoyed the ending of this otherwise terrible story, as Batman leaves the hospital, only to discover that another horrible crime was committed as he was working on this one, leaving him to reflect:
"Sometimes I feel I win the battle...Sometimes I think I've done somebody good...But the war goes on forever...And I'm only one soldier. Only one wounded soldier."
If, in fact, Grant was replaced mid-script, I've got to believe these words at the end were still his. It's the only writing in the issue that I truly enjoyed.
the plot synopsis in one ridiculously long sentence: Batman is losing to Tonka (see last issue), the kids from the boxing match last issue conveniently pass by, see the fight, and try to intervene, Tonka starts beating on them, Batman finds the inner strength to step in and save them, knocking Tonka into a wall and out of commission (I'm assuming he was then arrested. We never find out.) Batman is patched up at a local hospital while his attending doctor lectures him on the violence he causes, Batman listens in on a hidden mic he placed on the cameraman from last issue, he confronts him and forces a confession, decides against going for the guy's boss in favor of taking him down while he's viewing the next video with his clients, Gordon doesn't seem to understand but allows it just the same, Batman busts the party, he takes the clients to see the victim from last issue, the video broker grabs a surgical knife and holds one of the clients hostage while needlessly espousing his views of violence as a commodity, Batman takes him down, everyone learns their lessons, and Batman walks out of the hospital to discover that he missed out on another violent crime while trying to take care of this one.
A sucky, sucky issue overall.
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Post by shaxper on Jul 21, 2014 3:06:28 GMT -5
Batman #431
"The Wall" writer: James Owsley (later Christopher Priest) pencils: Jim Aparo inks: Mike DeCarlo letters: John Costanza colors: Adrienne Roy asst. editor: Dan Raspler editor: Denny O'Neil created by: Bob Kane
Grade: A-
Both the fact that this was an issue written by a filler writer and that the cover was a totally non-committal image that promised nothing about the story within convinced me that this issue was going to be a waste of time.
Boy was I wrong.
This was a fantastic issue and, more importantly, it was a very significant one for two major reasons:
1. The fact that Owsley is trying so hard to make Bruce behave in an anti-hero fashion after Jason's death, regretting that a criminal confessed so that he couldn't pound him, suggests that Starlin's extreme efforts to align Batman with his DKR characterization may have been an editorially mandated decision. It's clear by this point that O'Neil was doing anything he could to sell more books (in the letter column for this issue we'll find him describing his move into a swank new apartment in a better neighborhood -- gee, what paid for that?), and anti-heroes were selling like hotcakes at this point (as did DKR).
2. This is the first time that we really learn anything about Bruce's training post-crisis. Owsley is the first to show Bruce traveling to foreign lands to seek out great masters of the combative arts. Not only has this idea become a prominent part of Batman's established canon since the publication of this issue, but it's also clear that this issue served as inspiration for at least two other popular Batman stories in other mediums:
- The Batman: The Animated Series episode, "Day of the Samurai" shows Bruce learning the "touch of death" during his training and later having to take down a rival who studied under the same master. In the case of this story, it's the "vibrating palm," but the concept is the same.
- Batman Begins shows Bruce being trained by the same master that trained the League of Assassins. Of course, in the film it was Ras Al Ghul, but both stories still link the League of Assassins to Bruce's training. I suppose that this one leaves us guessing where Ras fits into Bruce's origin as a result of this connection.
Funny that Ras goes unmentioned in this story, though. Perhaps O'Neil wasn't planning to bring him back post crisis? "Son of the Demon," his only appearance after Crisis on Infinite Earths up to this point, appeared to be a non-continuity story.
I really like how this story came together in the end. Without obviously dangling any clues in front of you, Priest strung together the series of events in this story into a clever and tight mystery for Bruce to unravel. I really appreciated the seeming effortlessness with which Priest assembled the facts and then spelled out the solution for us without belaboring the point.
My only regret with this issue is the rushed ending, in which Batman questions his former master on why he trained mercenaries in the deadly arts without first questioning their motives.
Master: After all, I did not question your motives when you came to me.
Batman: No, you didn't. But perhaps you should have.
If Priest had given us another five pages first, this ending might have worked, but it was entirely undeserved here. We saw Batman being a jerk and wanting to abuse his powers earlier in this story, and he made a creepy comment about how he would have done the murder when examining the murder victim's body, but we never saw him actually cross any lines and, more importantly, we never saw him second-guess his actions until this moment (which comes so many pages after one minor comment about wanting to beat up a villain that could easily be forgotten by this point).
Still, a fantastic issue overall, especially in the level of clever detective work it gives Batman to do.
The minor details:
-What's up with the title of this story?
-Cei-U wanted to know when Bruce starts using his mastery of disguises in the post-Crisis era. Here's the first story to showcase it as he disguises himself as a janitor and a mortician, so committed to his roles that he actually goes on to repair a woman's sink after he's learned all he came to learn.
-Did anyone else think Batman had just killed that assassin with the vibrating hand before we turned the page and found out he'd only stunned him?? Whew. Priest really played to the idea that Bruce was teetering on the edge of the dark side here.
-So how many of Bruce's former masters know he's Batman? He clearly first came to this master as Bruce Wayne, and yet the master immediately speaks to Batman as if he is the same person, and Batman does not appear surprised by this.
- Bruce first sought out this master ten years ago (before he became Batman), yet the post-crisis continuity we've established for Batman based upon Starlin's work indicates that Bruce has been Batman for at least 11.5 years, and even the contradictory reference in "The Cult" has Bruce in his tenth year of being Batman. Priest's "ten years ago" date simply doesn't work.
- So why did Stuart create that alibi for himself and then confess to crimes so that he could be locked up in jail? I'm afraid I still don't understand this aspect of the story.
The plot synopsis in one ridiculously long sentence: The story begins with a flashback to a young Bruce Wayne seeking out Kirigi, the master teacher of an ancient form of combat, ten years earlier, we then cut to modern day with Batman angry that a criminal he'd been wiretapping and planning to violently intimidate had confessed, he gives the tapes to Alfred to transcribe and lies awake, unable to forget Jason, only for Alfred to discover something surprising on the tapes, Batman visits the criminal (Stuart) in jail to discuss a faked performance on the tape of Stuart witnessing a random murder, Batman decides this is an act since the murder was never reported and the body never found, Batman checks out the apartment where the murder took place while disguised as a janitor, he then tracks down the body in Los Angeles and examines it while disguised as a mortician, he then randomly and violently abducts a woman and then confronts Mugs (the crime boss who Batman deduced had hired The League of Assassins to kill that woman--which ended up being the wrong woman, thus explaining why Batman abducted the other woman--confusing, huh?), Mugs calls his man to call off the next hit, Batman traces the call and goes to the house, only to find the man dead and the League of Assassins there, a battle ensues, Batman uses a modified version of Kirigi's vibrating palm move against one of the assassins (who immediately recognizes it), and then Batman confronts Kirigi about not questioning the motives of those who he trains...including Batman.
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Post by shaxper on Jul 21, 2014 12:34:14 GMT -5
Detective Comics #598 "Blind Justice, Chapter One: The Sleep of Reason" writer: Sam Hamm pencils: Denys Cowan inks: Dick Giordano & Frank McLaughlin letters: Todd Klein colors: Adrienne Roy asst. editor: Dan Raspler editor: Denny O'Neil Batman created by Bob Kane Grade: A Whatever happened to Sam Hamm? According to Wikipedia, his career pretty much began and ended with the 1989 Batman screenplay, only going on to write two other scripts that would actually end up getting used, and neither proved to be impressive. "Blind Justice" appears to be the only other noteworthy work of his that reached an audience. I'm surprised by this because his writing is damn impressive. You'd think he would have done some more comics at the least. It's rare that a writer of any kind can make a successful transition to the comic book medium. Granted, it's become more commonplace in recent years, but it's still a challenging genre to cross into if you don't have a firm background in it. But Hamm comes off like a pro. It's late, so I'm not going to take the time to quote individual lines, but I will say that the narration sizzles with cool dramatic energy, and he writes Bonecrusher's dialogue quite convincingly as well. Most writers struggle with giving lines to any antagonist that isn't a cool-tempered criminal mastermind, but Hamm brings this fist-pounding villain to life with intellect, wry sarcasm, and an energy all his own as he proclaims that, "I AM the scheme." (of course, that won't occur until chapter 2). Beyond the strong writing and the cool ability (using ultra high and low frequency sounds as weapons), all that seemed noteworthy about this issue was Hamm adding the idea that Bruce meditates each night in order to make one hour of sleep feel like eight. He appears to be the first to introduce this idea. I believe I recall Wein addressing the issue of how Bruce balances being Bruce Wayne and Batman in his life in the pre-crisis era, but I can't seem to locate the specific review in which I addressed this. I don't remember the full explanation or how it handled the issue of sleep. Those muggers in the beginning remind me entirely too much of the muggers at the beginning of the Batman film. Both seemingly harmless clowns who turn violent on their prey on a moment's notice out of practiced necessity. I also thought it was interesting how Hamm described the smile of the man who shot Bruce's parents before revealing that the shooter was...Batman. Anyone reading this story after the film hit theaters would have been expecting someone very different after a description like that Hamm has absolutely no interest in aligning Bruce with his characterization in DKR. It's a nice break to have the post-crisis Batman characterized as follows: His dedication is unstinting. His motives--though some might argue otherwise--are noble. Yeah. O'Neil might argue otherwise. Thanks for this line, Hamm. Cowan's pencils are so uneven in this issue. At times they are striking (especially under Giordano's inks), but otherwise they're just "off" and odd looking. Occasionally, it's difficult to tell what's going on. I had to re-examine page 19 four times to determine what was happening in panel 5. Did Batman jump off, get knocked off, or pretend to get knocked off the pier? If Hamm's words weren't going to tell us, Cowan's pencils needed to. The plot synopsis in one ridiculously long sentence: Bruce is having nightmares in which a laughing Batman is the one who kills his parents, Batman investigates the murder of a security guard whose bones and organs were pulvarized to powder without disturbing the skin, a crazy homeless man who believes aliens are invading his thoughts and his impressionable friend try to mug a woman and fail, the woman turns out to be in town in order to track down her brother (she was adopted and just found out he exists), Bruce is unable to figure out how the murder was committed or who did it and blows off an appointment regarding Wayne Enterprises as Alfred ominously cautions that Bruce is not involved enough in what goes on over there, the woman turns up at Wayne Enterprises, her only lead on her brother being that he was working there, the director of Research, Mitchell Riorden, intercepts her and explains that there was an error -- her brother never worked there, meanwhile Batman tries to break up a drug deal but is beaten to it by Bone Crusher, a new villain who uses ultra high and low sound frequencies as weapons (he's clearly the killer of the security guard), Batman keeps failing to accurately assess Bone Crusher's capabilities, repeatedly underestimating him until Bone Crusher finally throws himself into the power lines, presumably killing himself (in real life, this would not kill you if you are not a conduit to the ground, of course), meanwhile the bums tell their dreams to each other, and the impressionable one explains he dreamt he was fighting Batman on the docks (which is exactly what Bone Crusher had just done). A strong first chapter, over-all.
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Post by shaxper on Jul 21, 2014 12:34:39 GMT -5
(Still) Detective Comics #598
"Blind Justice, Chapter Two: The Kindness of Strangers" writer: Sam Hamm pencils: Denys Cowan inks: Dick Giordano & Frank McLaughlin letters: Todd Klein colors: Adrienne Roy asst. editor: Dan Raspler editor: Denny O'Neil Batman created by Bob Kane
Grade: A
Unlike many other writers who have taken stabs at multi-part stories and utterly failed to pace them well, Hamm truly kicks this story into the next gear with chapter two, introducing new characters and complexities throughout the issue. Meanwhile, he takes the time to make us like characters like Dr. Riordan and Dr. Harbinger at first, even though Riordan turns out to be a bad guy early on in this chapter and Dr. Harbinger is implied to be the mastermind by the chapter's end. Most writers wouldn't take the time and energy to endear us to such characters as if they would remain long-standing supporting cast fixtures in the title, nor stagger the revelations of their true natures instead of conveniently revealing all at one time. Hamm paces this like a pro.
Hamm also slowly implies that the homeless guy from the end of last chapter who shares Bonecrusher's memories is Jeannie's missing brother. Sure, it's a coincidence that Jeannie showed up just as Bonecrusher became active, but I'll excuse that little convenience since everything else is so well paced and gradually revealed.
So, if Wayne technologies has developed a backpack that "relays electrical impulses from [the] brain to [the] lower body, bypassing the damaged spinal cord," why didn't they slap this onto Bruce after Knightfall? I guess someone forgot about it.
What are the chances that a police officer arresting Roy would bother to report his saying "I AM the scheme!" over the police dispatch station, what are the chances that a police officer out with Gordon would be listening to the dispatch immediately after that battle with Bone Crusher, and what are the chances he'd take note of such a line and bother Gordon with it if he wasn't connecting it to Bone Crusher (and he didn't seem to be)? More conveniences.
Cowan's art hits more extremes here, absolutely stunning in places, and so sloppy it hurts in others as eyes physically wander from their proper places, faces distort, and even severed utility poles appear to be falling in two directions at once.
However, Giordano absolutely outdoes himself in working over Cowan's pencils. The final panel on page 46, in particular, absolutely blows me away. Even Adrienne Roy uses the absolute perfect hues to compliment this work. Her coloring of Riordan's face in that last panel is outstanding -- just the right tinge of pink to portray a combination of anxiety and poor health that betrays his cool demeanor.
The plot synopsis in one ridiculously long sentence: The woman (Jeannie) seeks out "Family Finders, Inc" a (non-profit?) organization that is helping her locate her brother, the adviser there decides to call in a favor from Bruce Wayne (the organization's biggest supporter) to get more info on the potential cover-up at Wayne Tech about her brother (Roy) having worked there, Bruce meets Jeanie and seems immediately attracted to her, he agrees to help, he gives her a tour of the research division (where Roy supposedly worked), they meet Dr. Harbinger, Dr. Harbinger helps Bruce recall that they both knew Roy and Roy did work there, Riordan overhears and calls someone about their being on to Roy having worked there, Riordan promises that he has a plan to deal with it, Bruce and Jeannie are about to go out to celebrate when Bruce sees the bat signal and calls the date off at the last second, Roy gets mugged, but his homeless friends come to his aid and take him to the shelter, Batman is called in to stop Bonecrusher (who is back from the dead), Batman surmises that his motivation is to test his abilities, not to make a profit, Roy goes into a frenzy at the shelter, doing the exact same things Bonecrusher is doing against Batman, before Batman and the police can stop him, Bonecrusher blows himself up, a policeman repeats to Gordon and Batman that a man has been arrested at the shelter saying, "I Am the scheme," which was BoneCrusher's big line to Batman, Batman seeks out Roy in prison and learns that he has no memories, he asks Gordon's permission to take him into custody and has Roy studied by an expert who discovers a biochip surgically implanted in Roy's brain, Bruce introduces Roy to Jeannie, invites the two to stay with him for now, and begins helping Roy with his recovery, Roy is able to remember a codeword, "Sunday," Bruce accesses the Wayne Enterprises research database for such a project and discovers Project Sabbat (closely resembling "Sabbath" which is on Sunday), tries to access it, and finds his master password won't open the file, a mysterious man in the research division observes the attempted access of the files and reports this to Riordan, and Riordan then calls Dr. Harbinger and reports, "It's happened."
Excellent installment. The minor plot conveniences are all that prevent it from earning an A+ in my book.
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