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Post by tarkintino on Jul 8, 2021 12:17:15 GMT -5
Star Wars #100. At the time, reaching 100 had been a cause for comic titles to do one or more of a few things: celebrate all leading up to the issue (in a way that respected the journey), or having something important happen (see: The Amazing Spider-Man #100), but this? It was just another comic with no sense of recognizing the journey of the characters in any meaningful way, or giving a nod to the readers who had been there since #1. Martin's "art" was horrendous as usual, but Duffy's story was lifeless, and as noted before, its no wonder the sales of Marvel's Star Wars were in an unstoppable freefall at this point. There's none of the characterization and science-fantasy appeal of the movies (which Goodwin excelled at) to be found here.
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Post by Duragizer on Jul 8, 2021 21:48:19 GMT -5
Also, if Bey’s father was a Corellian, and his mother a Nagai, why is he a giant?? Neither of those races are giants. Hybridization is a wondrous thing. Just check out ligers; they're larger than either tigers or lions.
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Post by dbutler69 on Jul 9, 2021 5:19:56 GMT -5
Also, if Bey’s father was a Corellian, and his mother a Nagai, why is he a giant?? Neither of those races are giants. Hybridization is a wondrous thing. Just check out ligers; they're larger than either tigers or lions. But not that much larger...and they're also sterile.
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Post by dbutler69 on Jul 9, 2021 10:12:27 GMT -5
Star Wars #101Cover dated: November 1985 Issue title: Far, Far AwayScript: Mary Jo Duffy Artwork: Cynthia Martin (pencils)/Art Nichols (inks) Colours: Glynis Oliver Letters: Rick Parker Cover art: Bill Sienkiewicz Overall rating: 3 out of 10 Plot summary: At the Alliance base, Han Solo and Princess Leia are in the middle of a lover's tiff, when Han feels the hand of Fenn Shysa on his shoulder and is thrown to the ground. As the Corellian picks himself up, the former Mandalorian Supercommando explains to Leia that he has come to Endor to help the Alliance of Free Planets in its fight against the Nagai invasion. As Leia and Fenn depart, Han is left to become reacquainted with Shysa's companion, Bey, an old friend of his from childhood. Shortly afterwards, Han is sent on a mission in the Millennium Falcon, with C-3PO, R2-D2 and a group of Hoojibs led by Plif, to investigate a series of strange balls of energy that have been appearing in the local sector. As they near the phenomena, the Falcon is zapped by a bolt of energy and thrown through space to a far off world, where it crash lands. As Han clambers out of the downed craft, he comes under fire from a group of brigands who are in pursuit of a young couple on horseback. Solo intervenes, saving the two lovers and sending the brigands running. The young woman, who is impressed with Han's heroics, introduces herself as Princess Risa and her companion as Prince Gil. She explains that their fathers rule warring sides of the planet, but a truce has been struck and the pair will soon marry to secure a peaceful future for their world. Risa's father, King Cleroff, soon arrives on the scene and the princess explains to him how Solo saved her and Gill, while the King's brother and court vizier, Marius, instructs the royal servants to drag the Falcon back to their kingdom. Back at the royal palace, Han is welcomed and made comfortable, but finds himself missing Leia. Plif reports that he and the droids will have the energy that caused them to end up on this remote planet drained from the Falcon's engines by morning, but Han has realised that Risa has fallen in love with him and so he plots to restore Gil in her affections before leaving. Han arranges for the brigands to abduct Gil and instructs Cleroff to pay the ransom, thus earning the gratitude of Gil's family and maintaining peace. However, when the party leave to pay the ransom, they are captured by brigands and Marius is revealed to be intent on usurping the throne. Fortunately, Han had already guessed this and, in fact, his plan was designed to expose the treacherous vizier. As Cleroff's guards apprehend Marius and the bandits, the King and Prince Gil are saddened to see Han leave, while Risa, who is now once more in love with Gil, is indifferent. After finding his way back to Endor in the Falcon, a grateful Han is reunited with Leia, who he now appreciates more than ever. Comments: Star Wars #101 features another one of those stories set on some quasi-meadieval world, which we get from time to time in the Marvel series (see issues #64 and #89 for some other examples). Unfortunately, the chronology of the series gets all messed up here too, with the events of this issue taking place before #99. While talking to Patrick Daniel O'Neill in Starlog #120 from 1987, writer Jo Duffy recalled that the shuffling of issues at this point in the series was her idea: " Issue #101 was supposed to appear three months before it did, so we wound up introducing a character after he had already appeared. All we could do was run a box and explain what happened. I suppose I could've rewritten the story, but we had been working for about a year, building up some background on Han Solo, introducing characters from his past; we were doing an examination of themes of friendship and betrayal. It was absolutely essential, for the chronology, that the story in issue #101 take place before #100, because it was an important part of the theme." The character that was introduced in this comic, but who had already appeared in issues #99 and #100 that Duffy refers to, is Han Solo's childhood friend Bey. I've discussed Bey in some detail in my reviews already, but it's interesting how he and Han's dialogue in this issue, regarding Solo's somewhat cavalier attitude towards his romance with Princess Leia, ties in perfectly with what we learned in Star Wars: Episode VII – The Force Awakens about how their relationship ended. Duffy's script for this issue is nothing special and the story as a whole feels rather unnecessary. Still, I do quite enjoy the weird grouping of Han, the droids and the Hoojibs in this story, and some of the latter's dialogue is fairly amusing. However, the fact that Han states that he regards the Hoojibs as vermin, doesn't sit well with me at all; Han's been around these creatures long enough now to know that they are intelligent, telepathic beings, who have been of great assistance to the Rebel Alliance. His disdain for them seems rather silly and, thus, quite out of character. Something else that doesn't quite feel right is that, at one point, Han seems to be genuinely considering staying on this strange world and courting Princess Risa. Risa herself seems like a typically fickle, spoilt princess, while Prince Gil is clearly a bit of a drip and, overall, the pair are both utterly forgettable characters. Still, I enjoy the fact that Duffy kind of teases us with the idea that Solo is manipulating things in order to have Risa for himself, when, in fact, he is scheming to ensure that she and Gil will be happy together after he leaves the planet. Cynthia Martin's artwork is just as flawed and unappealing to me as in other recent issues. I mean, what's up with that depiction of the Millennium Falcon from the last page? Seeing such a well known and beloved spaceship drawn in such an inaccurate way is very jarring. Martin's art is also taking on some definite Japanese manga influences around this point in the series. While that might have been brave new territory for a mainstream American comic book in 1985, it's not something that I personally like for Star Wars at all. Also, I've always considered Bill Sienkiewicz's front cover for this issue to be the ugliest cover of the entire run. Summing up, this issue is basically a weird and highly forgettable solo adventure for Han and it really has very little to do with the ongoing Nagai invasion plot. In addition, the lesson that Han is supposed to learn from Princess Risa, and how it helps him to appreciate what he has with Leia, is all a bit soppy for my tastes. All in all, Star Wars #101 is a boring and largely inconsequential comic that you could easily skip, without ever missing it. Continuity issues: R2-D2 is shown to be equipped with a laser blaster here, but that contravenes accepted Star Wars canon. Favourite panel: Favourite quote: "According to the charts, we aren't anywhere in known space or hyperspace. We're without controls, going full-speed through nowhere!" – Han Solo alarmedly describes the Millennium Falcon's current location to C-3PO. It’s getting to be a chore to read this, but I’m almost at the end, so I’ll finish it up. If this story takes place before #99, why the heck not just release this comic before #99. The art is more cartoonish than usual. Plus, a really lazy drawing of Artoo on p.23. In addition to the mediocre plot, there’s a lot of odd dialoague. Han and Leia act like they’ve never declared theit love for each other, like they’re a pair of teenagers with secret crushes on each other or something. Ridiculous. Their relationship seems to have taken several steps backwards. And why does Han think that the hoojibs are “vermin”?? Where does that come from? If a planet has one side always facing the sun and the other side always away from the sun, as they imply here, wouldn’t that lead to HUGE temperature variations?? Can a hoojib communicate telepathically with a droid? I guess so.
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Post by tarkintino on Jul 9, 2021 11:51:09 GMT -5
In addition to the mediocre plot, there’s a lot of odd dialoague. Han and Leia act like they’ve never declared theit love for each other, like they’re a pair of teenagers with secret crushes on each other or something. Looking at her contributions to this series, one can step back to see Duffy never understood the movie characters or how the Han/Leia relationship had grown over the course of three movies, so her clueless handling of it in #101 is no surprise. Well, one should not expect scientific accuracy in Star Wars. It is science- fantasy, so its not going to attempt to explain or justify how or why certain things work by realistic standards...at least in SW EU of that era. That said, in the past 20+ years, SW has transformed into a version of Star Trek - The Next Generation - forward eras of Star Trek, with an over-emphasis on technobabble attempting to appear scientifically accurate, but comes off as obsessive, clumsy and neglecting telling good stories.
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Post by dbutler69 on Jul 11, 2021 10:43:35 GMT -5
Star Wars #102Cover dated: December 1985 Issue title: School Spirit!Script: Mary Jo Duffy Artwork: Sal Buscema (breakdowns)/Sam de la Rosa (finished art & inks) Colours: Petra Scotese Letters: Rick Parker Cover art: Kerry Gammill (pencils)/Sam de la Rosa (inks) Overall rating: 5 out of 10 Plot summary: Luke Skywalker and Lando Calrissian have returned to the planet Iskalon to bring word of Kiro's death to his people. However, the Nagai invaders have reached the planet and established a base there, from which they mean to enslave the Iskalonian population. Luke and Lando arrive on the remains of the subaquatic city of Pavillion, where several Nagai slavers have just finished slaughtering a group of Iskalonians. Below them, the Iskalonian leader, Mone, and a group of School members swim up from the depths to investigate the disturbance. As they break the surface, Mone and his followers find the Nagai warriors slain, but Skywalker insists that it wasn't his or Lando's doing. As Luke relays the news of Kiro's death, he is shocked to learn that the Iskalonians believe Kiro to be alive and on Iskalon, fighting against the Nagai. Elsewhere, at the Nagai base, Luke and Lando's arrival has been detected and a squad of warriors are dispatched to capture them. As the invaders storm Pavillion, Mone's companion Dania leads the School into the depths to safety, while Luke, Lando and Mone engage the Nagai. During the battle, Kiro appears, slaying several of the slavers, before returning to the sea. In the aftermath of the attack, Luke realises that a number of the School have been captured and transported back to the Nagai base. Fearing that they will commit suicide in order to avoid slavery, he and Lando don underwater breathing equipment and embark on a rescue attempt. Upon reaching the Nagai's underwater base, Luke hands Lando his makeshift lightsaber, before igniting his own blade, as they begin hacking away at the building's support struts. Kiro reappears and enters the base to rescue his people, with Luke following close behind. Inside, Kiro quickly eliminates the Nagai guards and, with Luke's help, frees the Iskalonian prisoners, but during the fight he is shot in the stomach. Luke frees the School just as Lando finishes cutting through the building's supports and the structure collapses, as Luke and the Iskalonians escape. Later, as Luke pensively surveys the oceans about him, once again believing Kiro to be dead, the Iskalonian suddenly appears alive and well. Kiro explains that, on Kinooine, he allowed Luke and Dani to believe that Den Siva had killed him because he needed to return to his homeworld and protect his people from the Nagai. He didn't want Dani to waste her life waiting for him to return, so he let her believe that he had perished. Kiro asks Luke and Lando to keep his secret and not to tell Dani that he is still alive, so that she can mourn him and finally let go of his memory. Comments: Star Wars #102 sees the return of artist Sal Buscema, with his second contribution to the series, following issue #93, "Catspaw". Just as with that earlier comic, Buscema's artwork looks lovely here – and probably seems better than it is, coming on the heels of Cynthia Martin's recent efforts. There are plenty of inventively composed panels on display and some beautifully drawn underwater scenes too. I should also note that Petra Scotese's colouring really enhances these aquatic sequences, bringing the underwater locale vividly to life... I also really like the way in which Buscema draws the Nagai; their weirdly elongated heads seem creepier and much more sinister under his pen than they do in Martin's manga-influenced art. Kerry Gammill's action packed front cover, with it's declaration of "Kiro's Back!", must've been an irresistible sight to fans of the long-lost Iskalonian when they saw it on the news stand. One slight grumble about the art would be that when the Nagai tower is first shown on page 8, it's drawn as having been being built on a rocky landscape above the water. Iskalon has no land, but that's definitely how the tower is pictured here, with clouds visible in the sky overhead, proving that it's situated above the water... Subsequent scenes featuring this tower show it to be located underwater, on the sea bed. I'm not sure whether it's Buscema or inker Sam de la Rosa who is at fault here, but since Buscema only did panel breakdowns for this comic (which often don't include any background details), I'm guessing that it was de la Rosa who mistakenly drew the tower above water. Clearly Scotese perpetuated that mistake by colouring the Iskalonian sky and billowy clouds appropriately. As for Jo Duffy's script, this is a fairly well structured tale and it's good to be back on Iskalon and to catch up with Mone, who has found himself a new companion named Dania Francis, following the death of his treacherous wife, Kendle. The water world of Iskalon really is one of Duffy's best and most memorable locations from the series and it's fitting that readers should be transported back here for the ending of Kiro's character arc (this would be his last appearance in the series). Incidentally, when editor Ann Nocenti was asked about the possibility of any upcoming romance for Luke on the letters page of Star Wars #96, she used the phrase "there are a lot of 'fish' in the sea" to hint that the young Jedi would perhaps become romantically involved with an Iskalonian. There's no evidence of that here and this would be the last time that readers would see the water world in the Marvel run, so perhaps this was simply a story idea that went unused due to the series being cancelled? I enjoyed the little fake out that Duffy hands us early on in this story, in which she leads us to assume that it's Luke who has killed the Nagai on Pavillion, when he and Lando Calrissian first arrive, before revealing that it was actually Kiro. However, there appears to be a continuity goof when one of the Nagai recognises Luke and Lando from the recent battle on Endor. But since Lando was in his ship, the Cobra, high above Endor during the battle, so how would any of the Nagai be able to recognise him? It also caused me to raise an eyebrow when the Nagai refered to that battle as "the second Battle of Endor" since, for them, it was actually the first. I mean, I can definitely understand the Alliance referring to the Nagai attack on Endor as "the second Battle of Endor", because it was their second battle conducted on or above the forest moon, but why would the Nagai call it that? Something else that prompted incredulity for me was the way in which Luke, Kiro and the other Iskalonians all managed to survive the Nagai tower toppling over and breaking apart. I suppose that underwater, the building would've fallen much slower than if it been above the surface, but still. I also found it mildly annoying that in the aftermath of the destruction, we find that Kiro is supposedly dead...again! Only for it to be revealed that, actually, he managed to survive (again!). I tell you, that little Iskalonian has more lives than a cat! However, by far the biggest problem that I have with this issue is concerning Kiro's decision to return to Iskalon without first letting Dani know that he had survived his fight with Den Siva. In addition, he makes Luke and Lando swear to keep the secret of his survival from the Zeltron – his rationale being that Dani will be better off thinking that he died on Kinooine, since he can't be with her while he's away defending Iskalon, which, frankly, sounds like the biggest load of clichéd rubbish I've ever read! I mean, I understand that Kiro would want to defend his people, but why does he have to abandon poor Dani or, worse, let her go on believing that he's dead? Wouldn't it have been kinder to send word to the Alliance that he was alive and well on Iskalon, and let Dani decide for herself whether to wait for him or join him? As we've already seen in the series, Dani is really hurting over her loss, so Kiro going back to Iskalon and not letting her know that he's alive seems like a pretty mean thing to do to someone that he supposedly loves – especially since he's wrong about his actions sparing her feelings and, in fact, Dani will be heartbroken and miserable throughout the remainder of the series. In addition, by roping Luke and Lando into his deception, it makes them look rather less than heroic too, since they are essentially now co-conspirators in Dani's suffering. Ultimately, we'd never get to see Dani learn that Kiro was still alive, due to the series being cancelled with issue #107. Overall, Star Wars #102 is superior to recent instalments of the series, but it's still not anything much to write home about. The artwork is really nice and the plot is reasonably well executed, but this definitely feels like Duffy cruising on autopilot and it's not up to the standards of her earlier writing on the series. "School Spirit!" also provides a problematic and rather unsatisfying climax to Kiro's character arc, which is unfortunate. Continuity issues: One of the Nagai slavers recognises Luke Skywalker and Lando Calrissian from their involvement in repelling the recent attack on Endor. However, Lando was involved in the space battle above Endor and therefore concealed within in his ship, the Cobra, so how would any of the Nagai recognise him? Favourite panel: Favourite quote: "I am glad to see you both … but there is no time for talk or joy now." – Kiro hurriedly greats Luke Skywalker and Lando Calrissian before entering the Nagai base to rescue his people. I agree with Confessor that the fakeout, making us believe that it was Luke that had killed the Nagai, was cool. Also, that last panel on p.4 is really cool. Nice job by Sal. Speaking of which, I’ve never been so glad to see Sal’s pencils after all of that Cynthia Martin artwork! Overall, I think the plot was good, though the ending wasn’t that great, and I felt the dialogue was mediocre. So why do the Nagai want a planet covered in water? Strategic location? But there are other habitable planets in the same star system, so this doesn't make sense. Also, is Kiro a Superman now? He didn't seem to suffer any damage from that shot in the chest, and he’s mowing through bad guys left and right, like some super ninja. And how the heck did Kiro know his people needed help, and how did he get back to their planet?? Plenty of unanswered questions here. Plus, Confessor makes more good points about Kira having more lives than a cat, and his cliched rationale on not telling Dani that he’s still alive. Which leads to what I meant about the plot being good here, but the ending being weak. Confessor’s last paragraph (“ Overall, Star Wars #102 is superior to recent instalments of the series, but it's still not anything much to write home about. The artwork is really nice and the plot is reasonably well executed, but this definitely feels like Duffy cruising on autopilot and it's not up to the standards of her earlier writing on the series. "School Spirit!" also provides a problematic and rather unsatisfying climax to Kiro's character arc, which is unfortunate.”) sums it up nicely.
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Post by dbutler69 on Jul 12, 2021 9:56:15 GMT -5
Star Wars #103Cover dated: January 1986 Issue title: TaiScript: Mary Jo Duffy Artwork: Cynthia Martin (pencils)/Art Nichols (inks) Colours: Michele Wrightson Letters: Rick Parker Cover art: Cynthia Martin (pencils)/Steve Leialoha (inks) Overall rating: 4 out of 10 Plot summary: While travelling to the planet Zeltros, Princess Leia's starship comes out of hyperspace above the planet Trenwyth, in the middle of a battle between the Nagai and another unknown force. The ship is damaged by a stray laser bolt, forcing the princess and her four Zeltron attendants to hideout in one of the planet's battle-torn cities, while they effect repairs. Leaving the craft to scout the area, Leia finds herself cornered by a Nagai warrior, who promptly collapses, due to injuries that he has sustained in the fighting. Leia takes him prisoner, as she and her Zeltron escorts continue to watch the movements of the strange, green-skinned humanoids that are battling against the Nagai. Later, after the prisoner has regained consciousness, Leia offers him some food and attempts to communicate with him, but he remains silent. When the princess turns her back, he leaps to attack her, as the Zeltrons rush to her defence. Leia and the Zeltrons eventually manage to subdue the Nagai by tying him up, which distresses him greatly, leading the princess to deduce that he must've been tortured by his mysterious green-skinned enemies at some point in the recent past. Taking pity on him, Leia decides to cut the prisoner's bonds, prompting him to collapse weeping into her lap. Though he is now free, the Nagai warrior seems content to stay with the party, leading the Zeltrons to speculate that he has become infatuated with the princess. With the Nagai's enemies preparing to leave Trenwyth, and Leia and the Zeltrons having finally complete the repairs to their ship, the princess explains to their guest that they will leave him with supplies and equipment. As they prepare to part, Leia and the Nagai warrior share a few minutes, in which he reveals that his name is Tai. Sometime later, after returning to the Nagai command ship, Tai reports to his superior, Commander Knife, as Lieutenant Den Siva looks on. Delivering his report, Tai describes how Leia and the Zeltrons looked after him and gave him shelter, while they hid from the Nagai's old enemy. Interpreting Tai's fraternisation as a sign of weakness, Knife throws one of his blades at him, hitting the Nagai warrior in the chest and killing him, as Den looks on in horror. Comments: With the publication of Star Wars #103, the series began its death throes, as the Nagai–Tof War kicked off and the comic changed from a monthly publication, to one that would now be coming out every two months. This change in the rate of publication was announced with a bare minimum of ceremony, by way of a simple, "be here in two months" comment from editor Ann Nocenti at the end of the letters page. In 2011, writer Jo Duffy told the Belgian Star Wars fan club magazine TeeKay-421 that "Tai" was one of her favourite stories that she wrote for the series. While it's certainly a reasonable, if unspectacular, character-driven piece, I'm not sure that I'd agree with the author that this is among her best work on the series. For one thing, although it's cool that Duffy tries to paint a more nuanced and sympathetic picture of the Nagai in this issue, her attempt at humanising the enemy feels very formulaic. It's the kind of thing we see in World War II movies fairly often, with captured German soldiers or pilots, who turn out to not quite be the monsters that the people of occupied Europe or the allied forces assume them to be. More interesting than the main thrust of this story, at least to me, are the two darkly fascinating scenes on the Nagai command ship that bookend the story. In the first, Den Siva's obsessive infatuation with Dani is given full rein, with his quasi-romantic fascination seeming decidedly stalkerish, as he tellingly refers to the Zeltron as "my Dani", even as he acknowledges that she must hate him. Yeah, Duffy paints a brilliantly creepy picture of Den in these opening pages. She also reminds us how menacingly sinister Knife can be and, as a result, what a great antagonist for the series he is. During the final scene on the Nagai command ship, we get a very dark ending to this story, in which the sympathetic Nagai character of Tai – who we've spent most of the issue getting to know – is struck down in cold blood by Knife, for nothing more than showing signs of weakness in front of the enemy. Den's abject horror at Knife's cold-blooded execution of his comrade will play into events in the remaining issues. While we're on the subject of Knife, something that's a little puzzling is why the other Nagai refer to him by that name. We were told back in Star Wars #91 that Knife isn't his real name; the Wookiees didn't have the linguistic dexterity to pronounce his actual name, so they called him something that in Galactic Standard translates as "Knife". So, why would the Nagai call him by this Wookiee nickname? This looks to me like Duffy forget how Knife's name was arrived at in the earlier issue, and Nocenti failed to pick up on it. Incidentally, we learn in this issue that most Nagai don't speak Galactic Standard. As for the art, it features all of the usual flaws and annoyingly un- Star Wars-y rendering that I always complain about whenever Cynthia Martin is working on the book. The front cover is quite exciting though, I suppose, and I should just note that this issue has a unique corner cover symbol, featuring a picture of Princess Leia, which looks to be drawn by Martin. Ultimately, the biggest problem with this issue is that not much happens in it. The story is significant for introducing us to the Tofs, who are intriguing by dint of being a hitherto unknown enemy of the Nagai, but we don't learn enough about them at this stage to really hook us. Tai himself never comes across as being quite as interesting or as sympathetic a character as Duffy seems to think he is, and the Zeltron "boy band" that Princess Leia has been hanging out with lately are quickly becoming annoying, rather than humourous additions to the cast. This issue doesn't even really work that well as a solo vehicle for Leia, since she ends up being somewhat sidelined by all the Nagai and Zeltron characters in the comic. So really, other than underlining Den's obsessive fascination with Dani – which is something that we had already guessed from the events of issue #97 anyway – and inaugurating the Nagai–Tof War, there's really not much to recommend this comic. The words "throwaway" and "filler" definitely come to mind. Continuity issues: None Favourite panel: Favourite quote: "Talk … or we'll hit you or something." – Jahn tries to sound menacing while interrogating the Nagai prisoner, Tai. I can’t believe that Duffy considers this one of her favorite Star Wars stories. It’s OK, but far from her best. The ending was oddly abrupt. More mediocre, angular, sketchy artwork, too. Yes, Confessor has a point that Den is brilliantly creepy.
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Post by tarkintino on Jul 12, 2021 10:26:47 GMT -5
Star Wars #102 / 103 - Duffy and Martin have only themselves to blame for the collapsing bridge that was Marvel's Star Wars. It was so uninspired and hack-ish at this point.
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Post by dbutler69 on Jul 12, 2021 14:49:17 GMT -5
Star Wars #104Cover dated: March 1986 Issue title: Nagais and DollsScript: Mary Jo Duffy Artwork: Cynthia Martin (possibly with uncredited inkers) Colours: Glynis Oliver Letters: Tom Orzechowski Cover art: Cynthia Martin (pencils)/Steve Leialoha (inks) Overall rating: 3½ out of 10 Plot summary: Luke Skywalker and Lando Calrissian have arrived on the planet Zeltros to meet with the Zeltron leaders, King Arnoe and Queen Leonie. Leia and her four Zeltron attachés have also made their way to the planet, after their recent stop off on Trenwyth, while Han Solo, Chewbacca, Dani, R2-D2, C-3PO and a group of Hoojibs have arrived in the Millennium Falcon. However, rather that enjoying being back on her homeworld, Dani is still haunted by the memory of her torture at the hands of the Nagai warrior Den Siva, and the subsequent death of her lover, Kiro. Unknown to the Alliance members, their arrival on Zeltros has been witnessed by Siva, from the safety of the Nagai fleet, which is using cloaking technology to remain hidden. At the same time, the Hiromi arrive in the system, with the intention of conquering the planet. The Nagai dismiss the presence of the Hiromi starships, however, since they don't belong to their sworn enemies, the Tofs. Meawhile, Luke and the others inform the Zeltron royals about the Nagai invasion, but the king and queen seem more interested in throwing a party for their guests. Leia believes – after having seen the Nagai's enemy, the Tofs, first hand – that it may be possible to broker peace with the invaders, but an embittered Dani is against the idea and insists that the Nagai should be wiped out. As Leia attempts to console the grieving and vengeful Zeltron, they are both ambushed by Siva and a group of Nagai warriors and taken prisoner. Outside the royal house, Luke and the Hoojib, Plif, stumble across the Alliance traitor Hirog and a squad of other Hiromi, who are planning to abduct the king and queen. Luke allows himself to be captured by the aliens, while elsewhere, a contingent of Nagai and Maccabree warriors storm the palace taking everyone prisoner, including Han, Chewie, Lando and the droids. Outside the palace, Leia's four Zelton escorts are captured by a group of Tofs, while another squad of the brutish creatures pound on the door of the palace kitchen, behind which the Hiromi are holding Luke and Plif. Comments: The Nagai–Tof War storyline continues in Star Wars #104, which is mostly on a par with the rather underwhelming story that we got last issue. There's no doubt that more happens in this comic than last issue, in terms of plot development, but none of it is terribly gripping and it lacks the character-driven dialogue of the last instalment. Unfortunately, the central cast of the comic continues to be sidelined and pushed out of the picture by the assorted Nagai, Zeltrons, Hiromi and Tof characters that pour into the comic, as each of these races converge on Zeltros, intent on conquering the planet, as part of their individual plans to take over the galaxy. Of these invading races, the most unwelcome for me are the Hiromi, who return for the first time since Star Wars #94. I noted in my review of that issue that I consider this insectoid race to be the worst designed aliens I've ever seen in a mainstream comic book. Worse still, is the return of the Hiromi traitor from issue #94, Hirog – a character so annoyingly jokey, that he's easily my least favourite original creation of the entire series. The story itself sees Jo Duffy abandoning the status quo she's been setting up in recent issues, whereby the Nagai invasion is the big new threat to the Alliance of Free Planets. Now, with the arrival of the Tofs, Leia seems to believe that there's the possibility of peace with the Nagai and that perhaps the Alliance could unite with them against this newer enemy. Trouble is, the Nagai have already been shown to be a brutally cold-blooded race, intent on total subjugation of the galaxy, so it seems utterly implausible that there could be any common ground between them and the Alliance. I mean, are we really supposed to be feeling sorry for the Nagai now? They're invaded numerous worlds and brought such terrible suffering to the people in the galaxy, that I would imagine that most readers would be inclined to agree with Dani that they should be shown no mercy. In addition, Duffy has Princess Leia claim that she didn't really know what evil was until she saw the Tofs in action on Trenwyth last issue. Right...so, Leia thinks that a bunch of fat, green-skinned space-buccaneers are more evil than the Empire was?! The Empire who subjugated and enslaved thousands of worlds, who wiped out the Jedi Order, who dismantled the Old Republic and Galactic Senate, and who destroyed Leia's entire home planet of Alderaan and killed everyone that she knew or loved? Ummm...no. Just no. Of course, I realise that Duffy is trying to set the Tofs up as a more scary adversary than the Nagai and is simply over-egging the pudding here, but the trouble is that we haven't seen anything in the comic yet to suggest that they are any kind of threat. Just like with the earlier Dani and Kiro romance, this is another unfortunate case of Duffy telling us what is happening, rather than showing us. There are other problems with this issue too, like when Luke mentions to Plif that Dani has always liked Leia. Huh?! As I recall, the two women couldn't stand the sight of each other for quite a long time. Duffy also fails to make the bumbling, cowardly Hiromi at all funny, despite the fact that this is clearly her intent. To me, this is yet more evidence that Duffy's writing on the series is steadily declining. I remember when she used to be much funnier! On the plus side, it's good to see Den Siva capturing Dani again, as he sinisterly promises the object of his creepy obsession that he will never allow her to escape again. It's also cool to finally visit the planet Zeltros, having seen so many Zeltrons in the series over the years, and it's definitely good to have the likes of Luke, Han and Leia all together again. Really though, I'm kind of struggling to find positive things to say about this issue. Cynthia Martin's artwork is on a par with last issue, which is to say that it's not terribly good and is much too cartoony and manga-influenced for my tastes. Glynis Oliver's colouring is well below her usual standards too, with its blocky primary colours and lack of nuance and detail. Interestingly, the inking credits for this issue read, "Not the real Cindy, but an incredible simulation." I take this to mean that Martin inked most of this issue herself, but possibly had help from another uncredited inker or inkers. Unfortunately, Martin's front cover mostly serves to highlight what a rubbish design the Hiromi have. Overall, this issue – with it's terrible, punning title, which nods to the musical Guys and Dolls – moves the Nagai–Tof War forward, but does so by inundating the comic with Duffy's own original characters, at the expense of the stars of the book. I can understand that Duffy would want to bring her own characters to the forefront, especially since Lucasfilm's ever more restrictive and draconian edicts about what she could or couldn't do with the likes of Han, Luke or Leia meant that story ideas for them were limited. But, at the end of the day, no matter how much we might've enjoyed original characters like Dani, Den Siva or Leia's four Zeltron escorts, fans ultimately followed this comic to read about the heroes of the Star Wars movies, and this series is now failing to give us enough of that. Continuity issues: None Favourite panel: Favourite quote: "Leia … I … miss Kiro so … I have such nightmares … I dream of love, and pain, and terror, all intermingled, and gone wrong … " – An emotional Dani confides her inner turmoil to Princess Leia. Boy, this issue stinks. Confessor has pointed out many of the flaws I saw (such as Leia claiming she didn't know what true evil was before seeing the Tofs, and Luke claiming that Dani has always liked Leia) plus I really don't see why Leia thinks that the Nagai might be all right after all due to the one Nagai she met last issue. He wasn't really that great of a guy! I also agree that the Hiromi are pretty lousy aliens. They are just too ridiculous. Then again, I find the Zeltrons kind of annoying. By the way, I wonder of the Hiromi helmsman Mr. Tahkay was named after George Takai?
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Post by tarkintino on Jul 12, 2021 15:26:46 GMT -5
By the way, I wonder of the Hiromi helmsman Mr. Tahkay was named after George Takai? Do you mean George Takei from Star Trek? I'm not sure.
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Post by dbutler69 on Jul 12, 2021 15:59:10 GMT -5
By the way, I wonder of the Hiromi helmsman Mr. Tahkay was named after George Takai? Do you mean George Takei from Star Trek? I'm not sure. Yup, that's the one. Mr. Sulu, the helmsman.
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Post by dbutler69 on Jul 14, 2021 6:39:13 GMT -5
Star Wars #105Cover dated: May 1986 Issue title: The Party's OverScript: Mary Jo Duffy Artwork: Cynthia Martin (layouts)/Steve Leialoha (layouts)/Ken Steacy (inks) Colours: Glynis Oliver Letters: Tom Orzechowski Cover art: Cynthia Martin (pencils)/Ken Steacy (inks) Overall rating: 3 out of 10 Plot summary: Luke Skywalker and Plif are captives of the Hiromi in the kitchen of the royal palace of Zeltros, as a group of green-skinned Tofs suddenly break down the door. Elsewhere, Han Solo, Lando Calrissian and Chewbacca are being held at gunpoint, along with the Zeltron king and queen, by a group of Nagai warriors. Princess Leia and Dani have also been taken captive by the Nagai and are being monitored by Den Siva, who has, in turn, been captured himself by a squad of Tofs. As the Tofs force Den to betray his Nagai comrades, Leia's four Zeltron attachés are dragged into the room as captives. Moments later, a group of Hoojibs arrive, creating a diversion and allowing Leia and Dani to attempt an escape. Meanwhile, back in the palace kitchen, Luke – with help from a mass of Hoojibs – uses the Force and his skill with a lightsaber to kill the Tofs who are holding him. Escaping with the Hiromi in tow, he and the Hoojibs quickly find and best another gang of Tofs who are pursuing Dani and the princess. As these Tofs are tied up, Dani and Leia depart to rescue Han, Lando, Chewbacca and the other guests in the royal court, while Luke, the Hoojibs and the Hiromi set off to attack the Tof command ship and rescue Leia's four Zeltron escorts. Comments: Frankly, the title of this story, "The Party's Over", could well be seen as a comment on the declining quality of the Star Wars comic at this point in the run. This third episode of the Nagai–Tof War story arc is more or less on a par with the last. The Hiromi continue to be bumbling and incompetent to the point of annoyance; the Tofs fail to come across as anywhere near as threatening as writer Jo Duffy clearly wants them to be; Cynthia Martin's artwork – with Ken Steacy doing the inks – is sloppy, overly cartoonish, and really not a great fit for Star Wars; and it still feels like the central cast are being sidelined by all the various invading alien races and original characters that now frequent the pages of the comic. On top of all that, even some of the more interesting original characters, like Den Siva, fail to shine in the way that they have done in other recent issues. Regarding the Tofs, who are green-skinned space-buccaneers, I suspect that, given Duffy's love of all things manga and Japanese, they were influenced by the work of Leiji Matsumoto on series such as Captain Harlock or Space Battleship Yamato (a.k.a. Star Blazers). Both of those manga series utilised a futuristic take on antiquated naval imagery in their spaceship design and costuming, just like Duffy and Martin do with the Tofs. Personally, I don't have any problem with the Tof's wearing traditional pirate garb, since space-pirates who dress like Earth pirates are something we've seen in the Star Wars comic going back all the way to the very first post Episode IV – A New Hope story in issue #7. Of course, later on we'll see them flying in star-cruisers that look like pirate galleons, which is something I definitely do not like, but I'll get to that in my next review. There's much to complain about or criticise in this issue, but focusing on the positive, something I do like is that it's nice to see Plif and the Hoojibs playing a larger than usual role in the story. It's also interesting to learn that the Hoojibs can dodge most attacks, due to their telepathic powers enabling them to know in advance from which direction an attack is coming, which makes a lot of sense. It's also great to see the feisty creatures, or "little hoppies", as the Tofs call them, getting stuck into a fight and helping the Alliance. That's something that we've not seen enough of in the series, since their debut in issue #55. I have to say, although they are often there in the background, the Hoojibs have generally been underused in the Star Wars comic. While we're on the subject of the Hoojibs, who are seen leaping into action on this issue's cover, I'd like to dedicate this review to Icctrombone . He posted this front cover over in the "Impossible and Goofy Covers and situations" thread some weeks back and I know that he really loves space-rodents in general and a certain green-skinned space-rabbit in particular. To sum up, this is another lacklustre issue of Star Wars, with some not terribly good artwork, a rather pedestrian plotline and too much focus on characters other than the core cast. It's fast getting to the point where this series needs to either shape up or be put out of its misery. For better or worse, in a couple of issues time, the latter is exactly what happens. Continuity issues: On the front cover, the Tof's skin is incorrectly coloured with a Caucasian flesh-tone, when it should be green. Favourite panel: Favourite quote: "Their thoughts are … revolting." – Plif the Hoojib relays the Tof's unsavoury intentions to Luke Skywalker. Oh, let me just say, I've got nothing to say. Confessor has summed up this issues flaws (and its few good points) rather well. Just two more issues to go. Phew!
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Post by Rob Allen on Jul 15, 2021 11:46:35 GMT -5
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Post by dbutler69 on Jul 15, 2021 12:28:01 GMT -5
Star Wars #106Cover dated: July 1986 Issue title: My HiromiScript: Mary Jo Duffy Artwork: Cynthia Martin (layouts)/Ken Steacy (inks) Colours: Daina Graziunus Letters: Tom Orzechowski Cover art: Cynthia Martin (pencils)/Joe Rubinstein (inks) Overall rating: 3½ out of 10 Plot summary: On the planet Zeltros, Luke Skywalker leads a mission to assault the Tof command ship and rescue Princess Leia's four Zeltron attachés, with Plif the Hoojib and a group of Hiromi in tow. Meanwhile, Princess Leia and Dani are attempting to rescue Han Solo, Lando Calrissian, Chewbacca and a number of other guests of the Zeltron royal court, who have been taken prisoner by the Nagai. As the two women near the area in which their friends are being held, Dani spies the Nagai warrior Den Siva in the custody of a group of green-skinned Tofs, following his capture and betrayal of his own race to save her. Soon the green-skinned aliens take the rest of the Nagai prisoner too, but blaster shots begin to strike the Tof guards, as Dan and Leia mount their rescue. During the fight, a wounded Nagai soldier takes aim at Dani, but Den saves her before surrendering to the the Zeltron, and proposing a partnership between his people and the Alliance of Free Planets. Elsewhere, Luke and his group board the command ship using a security code obtained from one of the Tofs that he and the Hiromi captured. As Luke takes on a number of attacking Tof guards, Plif and the Hoojibs drain the ship's systems of power, while the Hiromi rescue the four imprisoned Zeltrons. Before leaving the Tof ship, Luke plants explosives to destroy the craft. Comments: The Nagai–Tof War continues with this fourth instalment, which has a terrible title that is presumably a punning play on the phrase, "my hero!" The Hiromi themselves continue to irritate me, but actually, I must admit that, in this particular issue, writer Jo Duffy succeeds in making at least some of their dialogue slightly humorous – which is a first! It's also interesting to see the Hiromi openly revising their recent history, as they begin to talk about how they have always been loyal members of the Alliance of Free Planets, while conveniently glossing over the fact that they originally intended to conquer the Alliance and enslave the galaxy. Despite all this, the bumbling incompetence, cowardice and ill-conceived humour of these poorly designed, bug-aliens is still extremely annoyingly to me, for the most part. In fact, there is an intrinsic problem with Duffy's sub-plot about the Hiromi discovering their courage in this issue, which is that she has done such a good job of making these aliens seem incompetent and lacking in valor that it's hard to believe that they could, for example, intimidate a Tof soldier to such an extent that he would reveal his command ship's security code. I just can't buy into that working at all. As an aside, I can't help but wonder if the name of the Hiromi navigator in this issue. Mr. Tahkay, is a nod to actor George Takai who played helmsman Sulu in Star Trek? Given Duffy's fascination with all things Japanese and Sulu's Asian heritage, it certainly seems likely. Like last issue, Duffy's script is rather pedestrian and not terribly exciting. Still, we get the climax of Den Siva's character arc, when he not only betrays his own people to save Dani, who is the object of his obsessive love, but also suggests the forming of an alliance between the Nagai and the Alliance of Free Planets. As for the art, Cynthia Martin's work is as ugly and cartoony as ever, generally speaking, but there are actually a few rather pretty looking panels in this comic. Take this depiction of a Zeltron temple, for instance... On the other hand, the depiction of those space-buccaneers, the Tofs, as having sailing ship-like space-galleons is just a terrible idea. As I mentioned in my last review, this was most likely Duffy's idea, rather than Martin's, and was probably inspired by the work of Leiji Matsumoto and his Captain Harlock or Space Battleship Yamato series, which both use antiquated naval imagery in their starship design. Still, space-galleons are a big no-no for me in sci-fi – especially when they are drawn as badly as they are here! All in all, this is yet another lacklustre issue of Star Wars, with bad art, a workaday script and way too much focus on the Hiromi, Nagai and Zeltrons, at the expense of the stars of the series. The final panel of the comic shows us that, after nine years of publication, the writing is definitely on the wall for the series... Continuity issues: None Favourite panel: Favourite quote: "I … suspect that our allies, the glorious Hoojibs, have been feeding off the energy in the security systems. Forward … er … and if anyone wishes to hold hands until we reach a more brightly lit corridor … I, for one, shall ask no questions afterwards!" – Captain Hookyr of the Hiromi timidly leads his men through the darkened interior of the Tof command ship. I agree with Confessor that the hiromi are annoying, and that the dialogue was actually somewhat funny this time. I, too, don’t buy the hiromi’s sudden heroism. I was surprised to see Artoo fire a laser at somebody as an offensive weapon. I don’t think I’ve ever seen him do that before. And now, I see that Confessor has already mentioned my thought about the navigator being named after George Takai. I will say, though, that Luke fighting with two light sabers is kinda cool. That would make a nice visual in a movie.
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Post by wildfire2099 on Jul 15, 2021 22:31:59 GMT -5
Man, you guys are making me be less sad if the last epic volume is never released!
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