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Post by Deleted on Jun 8, 2016 2:55:09 GMT -5
Just a quick note to apologise for the lack of updates and suddenly dropping off the radar. I am currently moving house, plus looking for another job, plus getting married next month, and the house we are looking at will need at least six months of serious DIY work (new floors throughout, new extension roof, knocking down walls...) well sometimes I get a bit distracted! Why do I picture you screaming "It's Clobberin' Time!" as you get set to do the demolition part of the DIY renovation and start taking things apart? -M
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Post by coinilius on Jun 8, 2016 5:27:06 GMT -5
Just a quick note to apologise for the lack of updates and suddenly dropping off the radar. I am currently moving house, plus looking for another job, plus getting married next month, and the house we are looking at will need at least six months of serious DIY work (new floors throughout, new extension roof, knocking down walls...) well sometimes I get a bit distracted! Wow, no wonder you haven't had time to update - sounds like you have a lot on your plate!
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Post by shaxper on Jun 8, 2016 9:27:36 GMT -5
Just a quick note to apologise for the lack of updates and suddenly dropping off the radar. I am currently moving house, plus looking for another job, plus getting married next month, and the house we are looking at will need at least six months of serious DIY work (new floors throughout, new extension roof, knocking down walls...) well sometimes I get a bit distracted! Well congrats on the marriage and on any other part of those massive changes that will bring you increased contentment!
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Post by Icctrombone on Jun 9, 2016 5:25:39 GMT -5
Just a quick note to apologise for the lack of updates and suddenly dropping off the radar. I am currently moving house, plus looking for another job, plus getting married next month, and the house we are looking at will need at least six months of serious DIY work (new floors throughout, new extension roof, knocking down walls...) well sometimes I get a bit distracted! You are doing the top three things that cause stress all at the same time. Good luck , my friend.
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Post by shaxper on Jun 16, 2016 23:26:21 GMT -5
Read the first issue tonight and positively adored it. I'll admit to reading probably only 60% of the content you've provided thus far in regard to the issue; some of it strikes me as very accurate (I'm especially intrigued by Captain Victory being Frankenstein, and by the idea that he's burning out his soul), and there are some circumstances where I think you may be reading too deeply, but truly this is a work worthy of serious critical scrutiny. I don't think I've seen Kirby try this hard and be this purposeful on a project since The Fourth World. Unlike Silver Star (published shortly after) which was clearly a cash-in on a failed movie script, Kirby seemed to truly believe in this project and to put his top level work and dreams into it.
I look forward to reading more from you!
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Post by tolworthy on Jul 18, 2016 12:05:33 GMT -5
It looks like it will be a long time before I have the time to finish the series in depth. But I'm sitting here waiting for a solicitor to email, so have a few hours. (We just bought a house, and get married next week, so it's hard to concentrate on my regular work.) So here are the top ten reasons why I think Captain Victory is Kirby at his best: a misunderstood masterpiece, a crowning glory to his life's work, etc, etc. Now with pictures! I didn't want to do that before, because the in depth analysis covered every frame. So that would mean copying the entire series. But I don't feel guilty about showing just a few frames here and there. OK, let's go! Reason 10: this completes his fifty year story.It is my belief that Kirby's work forms a single story: the history and future of mankind. Captain America led to Thor, Thor led to the New Gods, and the New Gods ends with Captain Victory (what a perfect name!). Here is where we finally learn Captain Victory's life story. Any of this sound familiar? And here is where we learn of his father. Seen that before anywhere?
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Post by tolworthy on Jul 18, 2016 12:20:40 GMT -5
Reason 9: this is a big, big story.This story is about the future of mankind, the scale of the universe, the purpose of life, and more. Everything Kirby touches takes on an epic scale. Take for example a story set in space. Other writers show Earth as the effective center f the universe, with humans racing about space with no effort, and space being filled with beings who are much like us. SO they make space seems small. But Kirby's universe is much, much bigger than us. The is a feeling of infinite scale, always something amazing to discover. I love that line about the edge of the universe: "where life and order become speculation and superstitious fear". And that Kirby understands distance: how the light from the explosion will take hundreds of thousands of years to be seen by the nearest star. And let's talk aliens. When other writers do beings from another dimension they look human, more or less. But Kirby knows what the word "dimension" means. Captain Victory notes that, to this higher dimensional being, we appear like simple flat cartoons. And he captures the frustration and difficulty she has interacting with us. Kirby does not do small. Or rather, when he does do "small" (such as when he co-invented the romance genre) he deals with themes that are as big as the human race itself. He draws attention to this with the sub plot of "Spray Gun Lazlo" - the ship's toilet cleaner. Which seems like a silly joke at first, a way to show how Klavus once had humiliating jobs. But ends up saving the galaxy. Which seems silly until you realise that Kirby is right: tiny germs are more powerful than armies. All of Kirby's silly humour is like that: I mentioned the Goozlebobber earlier as another example. It seems absurd and trivial at first, but masks a serious and important point.
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Post by tolworthy on Jul 18, 2016 12:33:39 GMT -5
Reason 8: the familiar and bestAlthough this is packed with new ideas, it has enough references to other part of the Kirbyverse that it feels familiar and wonderful. Here for example is the distortion zone between our reality and sub space: To anybody who loves the Fantastic Four this is so familiar! And anybody who remembers FF 51 will recall that what we later called "the negative zone" was in fact merely a part of subspace (here called hyperspace: same thing). I mentioned earlier how the Insektons bursting out of the street reminds me of the cover to FF 1, and minor characters like the Goozlebobber and Mr Mind share similarities with Mr Fantastic and the Supreme Intelligence. Of course, these are not the Marvel characters. Marvel characters always stay the same (more or less). Kirby's new characters are different. But Kirby's characters change constantly: five years is a very long time in the Kirbyverse, as it is in real life. It is easy to imagine how a Fantastic Four character in 1965 could evolve into a Captain Victory character by 1984.
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Post by tolworthy on Jul 18, 2016 12:41:46 GMT -5
Reason 7: the dialogkirby's dialog is not like most comics. It is both easier and more difficult, but infinitely more rewarding IMO. it is easier because on the surface it uses simple words, short descriptions, and visual imagery. To somebody bought up on Stan Lee's easy familiarity Kirby's dialog can seem stilted or clunky at first. But at least it is very plain. However, when we slow it down, treat each sentence fragment as a separate panel, Kirby's dialog is a thing of beauty. There is so much packed into every phrase. In my view, moving from Stan Lee dialog to Jack Kirby dialog is like moving from sweetened milk to rare prime steak. It requires slowing down, savouring, recalibrating how we read. Yes, it takes more time. But it's worth it.
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Post by tolworthy on Jul 18, 2016 13:00:16 GMT -5
Reason 6: the layersWith most comics, what you see is what you get. But with Captain Victory there are always new layers to uncover. On the surface Captain Victory is like Judge Dredd: more machine than man, with no life outside his work. He seems always cold, sometimes brutal, sometimes a jerk. But Kirby provides a supporting cast to bring out the nuance that we might miss. First we have Klavus. While not technically human, Klavus shares familiar goals and fears and reactions, so we can easily relate to him. We can see ourselves in his shows, dealing with this frustratingly distant captain. Klavus shows us the surface CV. Next we have Tarin. Tarin is more heroic, and his arguments with CV show us that CV is not what he seems. In the climax to the insekton battle for example, Tarin is clearly the better choice for operating the final weapon. And in any other story we would expect the argument to end with Tarin doing the job (and dying heroically). But we clearly see that CV does not always choose the best thing for his role. In fact he wants to die, even though it means risking the mission. Finally we have Mister Mind, the telepath. If we haven't worked it out by issue 6, he states it plainly: this is bad acting. Captain Victory is not a bully, he is not a jerk, he does not live for his job, he does not want this. he is a man in turmoil. This becomes clearer and clearer toward the end. We can then go back over CV's earlier actions and see the interpersonal conflicts in a new light. I think the layers are why CV did not sell well. At first it seems like a one dimensional story. But by the second arc it is anything but. I think the second arc is much more enjoyable than the first. But the first was necessary,as a build up. In that regard it reminds me of The History of Mr Polly by H. G. Wells. When I read it at school I hated it at first. Mr Polly begins as an uninteresting and not likeable character, and the reader has t slog through chapter after chapter... until he begins to realise that Mr Polly is a lot more interesting than he seems. Captain Victory is the same.
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Post by tolworthy on Jul 18, 2016 13:11:13 GMT -5
Reason 5: the humourHumour is a personal thing, so feel free to disagree. I mentioned how I like Goozlebobber and Mr Mind and the toilet cleaner. Because I like absurd silliness that turns out to be deadly serious. I also really relate to Captain Victory's sense of humour. it's extremely subtle but it's there. For the first arc he seems deadly serious all the time, and this is necessary because it establishes the pressures he is under. But look at the time when he smiles. He gets an innocent playful pleasure from the few things he enjoys (see a later post). And he seems to genuinely enjoy his little contests with Mr Mind. As a telepath, Mr Mind should know exactly when Captain Victory is winding him up. But CV gains pleasure from misdirection, and the intellectual exercise of pitting his mind against one that is (on paper) superior to his. Mr Mind's weakness is that he is so overwhelmed by data that he tends to take things literally where possible. CV is tickled by these little conflicts, pretending to be super angry. You can tell he likes it.
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Post by tolworthy on Jul 18, 2016 13:35:48 GMT -5
Reason 4: the noble deathswhen Stan Lee and Jack Kirby collaborated, one of the hallmarks of Stan Lee's writing (according to a article in the Comics Journal, if I recall), was the tear jerking noble death. See Franklin Richards, the unnamed scientist in" This Man This Monster", the Gremlin, etc. When people argue about what influence Kirby had on the plots, those parts are all Stan. I agree. Because I think Kirby did deaths much better. The typical noble death is either a red shirt death or a sham. Either we get some nobody character to die for us, or the hero dies but comes back. I loved these at first, but the more they happen the more they bother me. How can a hero be a hero if it's the other guys who always pay the price? And if the hero does die for good, doesn't that mean the bad guys won? And since when is death ever noble? There is nothing noble about seeing a loved one suffer, their children abandoned. But I think Kirby's approach is more powerful and more inspiring. Kirby's attitude to death is that it is not a good thing: he fought in the war and that hammers any "noble death" idea out of you. He has said in interviews that his characters do not die. Or rather that he does not believe death is permanent because we live on through our children. This is how he handles death in Captain Victory, and I think it's beautiful. When CV's mentor dies he lives on through Captain Victory. CV is allowed fifty clones. But he is burning though them as quickly as possible, which brings up the counterpoint to the noble death: CV is not happy with his life, so why would he want it to continue? When CV's lover died it was powerful because it is half way between the noble death and CV's unwanted life: she should have lived on through his love, but she cannot. He is one of the gods: his life is duty. She cannot share that and so (if we see her as an individual - more on this later) her ideas and hopes die with her. CV never wanted the life that was forced on him, and is not free to be the carefree person he wants to be, so must let her go though he does not want to. It's powerful stuff. I put this high up the list because Kirby is often accused of not having human relationships and emotion in his stories. I disagree. Kirby's characters have such strong passions that they must keep them barely bottled up les they overflow and destroy them. Kirby is like Jane Austen in that regard: such powerful feelings are expressed with just a word or a look. But unlike Austen he does not go for the easy ending. Captain Victory does not get his old sweetheart back at the end, and she does not get him: she stays dead. Captain Victory has to deal with it, and deal with it he does (next!)
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Post by tolworthy on Jul 18, 2016 13:43:03 GMT -5
Reason 3: philosophyKirby explores the biggest questions. He contrasts the romantic approach (Captain Victory, always seeking new horizons) with the spiritual approach (Klavus, seeking rest and closure). He deals with a universe that is infinitely complex, with no "final" scale in sight, yet at the same time the tiniest germs can fell the mightiest warrior. I love the debates between the characters. I love this sequence:
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Post by shaxper on Jul 18, 2016 14:14:49 GMT -5
First off, a pre-congratulations for next week, Chris! Second, a post-congratulations on the move and house!! I've been paused in my reading of this series because I didn't want to get too far ahead of your reviews, but now I think I'll finish up so that I can fully take in your reasons and evidence here. I don't always agree with your arguments, but I always--absolutely always--find them meticulous and fascinating. Thanks so much for finding time to do this today!
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Post by tolworthy on Jul 18, 2016 14:26:22 GMT -5
Reason 2: Kirby has answersAny fool can ask questions, but providing intellectually satisfying answers is another matter. Kirby does both. We see the only times that Captain Victory is happy: when he is exploring and discovering. He gains pleasure simply from being part of this. As a youth he loved a woman but that was not to be. In issue 1 it is hinted hat he loves his work, but that is an act. What he really loves is ideas. Eventually he finds a higher dimensional being, someone who sees our reality the same way we see a flat page of a book. She becomes his true love, always unattainable, yet a vision to inspire him. I list this as number 2 in my top 10 because I am so impressed by Kirby's story structure, his unity of theme, how it holds together as a single story. The "victory is sacrifice" theme is front and center throughout. It's a strong message. It's a powerful message: we win by giving ourselves for our friends: we are a group, not individuals. And so Kirby's great epic comes full circle. Kirby's fame began with Captain America,. an individual who represented a group. it ends with Captain Victory, and individual who is one with the group. Kirby's Captain America agonised over the death of Bucky. But Captain Victory has victory over death. he does not agonise over the death of Alaria. Yes, he wept when she died, but she had chosen to devote her every waking thought to the group. She became one with the group. because the group survives so does her ideals, her thoughts, her choices, her likes and dislikes: she lives forever. And since Captain Victory is exploring an ever expanding concept of reality (including fiction), one day no doubt they will be physically, individually reunited as well. This story has a strong beginning, middle and end. CV grows and develops as a character, from suicidal to happy. At the start we see CV as very cold and distant. But by the end he seems to be at peace and happy. The Three Musketeers issue is a wonderful way to show that they are now friends having fun. Sure, CV acts like a serious leader should, but you can tell they are best friends, exploring the wild edges of reality (in that case, where "reality" and "fiction" meet). It's happy ever after.
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