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Post by Deleted on Jun 26, 2022 17:23:31 GMT -5
Is a writer doing a new draft of a book after getting feedback from an editor or beta-readers cheating too? Or an editor asking for pages to be redrawn after they have been drawn/inked because they didn't like they way the storytelling was executed or they spotted an error? Or how about bands in the studio doing a new take on a song after a demo was recorded and listened to by audiences because of feedback from those audiences? No creative process that is any good is done in a single draft. Revising based on feedback from editors, beta-readers, test audiences, etc. is part of the creative process. It's not cheating.
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Post by codystarbuck on Jun 26, 2022 17:41:06 GMT -5
To me, cheating is what Lucas did with the original Star Wars trilogy, where he kept tinkering with it and changed the whole motivation of scenes. It was bad enough that we got the clumsy scene of Han ducking Greedo's shot (through CGI manipulation); but, then we got retroactive crap, like inserting Hayden Christiansen into the end of Jedi, when he was only a toddler, not a member of the cast. The one time I thought Lucas' tinkering actually resulted in a better film was on the DVD release of THX-1138. CGI was used to expand upon the underground city and it opened the scale up more. Other than that, he mostly left the film alone. With the Star Wars films, he just kept pulling out the scissors. In the words of Henry Jones Sr, "Let it go."
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Post by Deleted on Jun 26, 2022 17:42:27 GMT -5
Is a writer doing a new draft of a book after getting feedback from an editor or beta-readers cheating too? Or an editor asking for pages to be redrawn after they have been drawn/inked because they didn't like they way the storytelling was executed or they spotted an error? Or how about bands in the studio doing a new take on a song after a demo was recorded and listened to by audiences because of feedback from those audiences? No creative process that is any good is done in a single draft. Revising based on feedback from editors, beta-readers, test audiences, etc. is part of the creative process. It's not cheating. -M My only issue is that I feel there’s a distinction - or should be - between creative personnel, such as editors and producers, and members of the public. I can appreciate and get behind an editor telling John Byrne not to do something, or a producer having input during a movie’s shooting. I can’t quite get behind audiences doing the same after a movie has been made. I’m the guy known for the worst analogies ever, but I look at it like this: if I’m on a safari tour, it’s my job to sit in the Jeep and let the safari guide do his work. I can compliment him afterwards - or I can retire to the bar and tell everyone that the safari guide sucked, was unengaging, lax, etc. But I’m not sure I should have any input in to how he does his job. As long as he’s doing things legally, safely and well-regulated, I’m not sure I should be involved in how things progress. I either like his tour or I don’t. I’d be fine with the safari guide’s manager instructing him to change this or that - or giving him advice, mentoring him in his duties, etc. And I wouldn’t call being a safari guide “art” like making a movie or comicbook is. I guess I’m just coming up with another lame analogy about how we sometimes have to let people do what they do - and either like it or dislike it. (I realise my analogy can’t really extend to certain professions, e.g. if your lawyer is doing a bad job, and really isn’t advocating your case that well, you have a right to sack him or have robust words with him) In a nutshell, I guess I’d like people to make their art - in collaboration, of course - and change what may be needed/required during the creative process, but not after it is completed, especially with something as subjective as test audiences.
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Post by Icctrombone on Jun 26, 2022 17:47:09 GMT -5
Like anything, it depends on the reasoning behind the move and the end result. Re-editing and reshooting have saved some films. In other cases, it didn't matter because the end result still stunk. I think it is better if you can fix it in the editing, rather than having to resort to re-shoots. Often, the energy doesn't match the original footage. Reshoots or shooting additional material has helped films, such as raiders of the Lost Ark, where Marcia Lucas spoke up and said it was a big mistake that Marion disappeared from the film, as originally edited. Spielberg saw the wisdom of what she was saying and quickly shot the scene of Indy and Marion meeting outside, then going off together. Major League originally ended with a reveal that the team owner had actually manipulated the situation to produce a winning team and save the ballclub, rather than the presented idea that she was an evil witch who was trying to tank the team so she could move it to someplace better than Cleveland. Test crowds hated it and crapped all over it. They edited that out and kept her as the villain, until the end and it was a big hit. Superman 2 had to reshoot because of Marlon Brando's lawsuit against the Salkinds, and replaced Jor-El with Lara for the scene where Superman consults the crystals for guidance about his love of Lois. The Donner Cut shows the previous footage (what had been recorded, with some CGI to enhance it, since Brando hadn't recorded the whole scene). There, that's 5. Stay the way you are ' buck.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 26, 2022 17:58:38 GMT -5
Is a writer doing a new draft of a book after getting feedback from an editor or beta-readers cheating too? Or an editor asking for pages to be redrawn after they have been drawn/inked because they didn't like they way the storytelling was executed or they spotted an error? Or how about bands in the studio doing a new take on a song after a demo was recorded and listened to by audiences because of feedback from those audiences? No creative process that is any good is done in a single draft. Revising based on feedback from editors, beta-readers, test audiences, etc. is part of the creative process. It's not cheating. -M My only issue is that I feel there’s a distinction - or should be - between creative personnel, such as editors and producers, and members of the public. I can appreciate and get behind an editor telling John Byrne not to do something, or a producer having input during a movie’s shooting. I can’t quite get behind audiences doing the same after a movie has been made. I’m the guy known for the worst analogies ever, but I look at it like this: if I’m on a safari tour, it’s my job to sit in the Jeep and let the safari guide do his work. I can compliment him afterwards - or I can retire to the bar and tell everyone that the safari guide sucked, was unengaging, lax, etc. But I’m not sure I should have any input in to how he does his job. As long as he’s doing things legally, safely and well-regulated, I’m not sure I should be involved in how things progress. I either like his tour or I don’t. I’d be fine with the safari guide’s manager instructing him to change this or that - or giving him advice, mentoring him in his duties, etc. And I wouldn’t call being a safari guide “art” like making a movie or comicbook is. I guess I’m just coming up with another lame analogy about how we sometimes have to let people do what they do - and either like it or dislike it. (I realise my analogy can’t really extend to certain professions, e.g. if your lawyer is doing a bad job, and really isn’t advocating your case that well, you have a right to sack him or have robust words with him) In a nutshell, I guess I’d like people to make their art - in collaboration, of course - and change what may be needed/required during the creative process, but not after it is completed, especially with something as subjective as test audiences. Pick up any novel. Look at the acknowledgements page. Those are almost all readers who read the book during the creative process whose feedback led to other drafts. They aren't producers, or editors. They are readers. Some may be writers as well, but they are audience members. Getting feedback can only improve a creation. You don't have to follow the feedback, but getting the feedback causes a creator to look at their creation from a fresh perspective. Sometimes creators get wrapped up in their own head, fall in love with things in their creation that don't need to be there or make the final product worse but don't get edited by the creator because they can't see it as they are too close to it. There's an art to storytelling, but the ultimate goal is to tell the story in the most effective way you can for the audience. Reciters of epic poems in Ancient Greece and elsewhere would tailor the recitation to the audience with each telling, altering characters, plot points, or what have you to better resonate with the audience receiving the story. Sometimes the storytellers are too close to the material and cannot see where it is not connecting with audiences until an audience sees it. Whether that audience is an editor, a beta-reader, a producer, a director, a test screening audience, an editor looking at dailies during rushes, a friend or relative you ask to look at what you have created, or what have you, getting feedback only improves the creative process. (However, getting feedback is not the same as doing what the person giving the feedback says, that's a terrible idea, but looking at the material with fresh eyes based on how people have interacted and reacted to it to see what is working and what isn't, that's an integral part of a good creative process. Don't confuse hubris with "artistic integrity" and the idea that an artist's vision is more important than the audience's reaction is a late accretion to western culture that has resulted in a lot of poorly conceiver and poorly received "art" being created for no purpose but to serve the creator's ego. Some exceptional art was created that way too, but that's the thing with something that is exception-it is the exception not the rule. And even the exceptional stuff could have benefitted form some feedback and the creator looking at it from a fresh perspective. No art/creation is ever finished, it simply reaches a point where the creator releases it into the wild to be experienced by audiences, but revising something after getting feedback is not cheating, but it is ultimately up to the creators to determine when to release into the wild. But there are a lot of rough drafts released into the wild before they were really ready to be because creators were too lazy or too arrogant to get feedback or to look at it for outside their own head to see if it needed more revisions to be ready. -M
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Post by Prince Hal on Jun 26, 2022 19:08:26 GMT -5
Happens all the time in theatre. Not cheating, simply using another means to try to get it right. It's why books have editors.
That's why, at least in the old days, Broadway-bound shows did tryouts in places like New Haven. Then, when they do get to B'way, plays do a week or two, sometimes even more, of previews.
And comics used to print "test versions." Showcase and Brave and the Bold were two of them at DC. For a while, Marvel Super-Heroes was another. You also had Marvel Premiere and a few others.
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Post by Confessor on Jun 27, 2022 0:17:32 GMT -5
Echoing others here: definitely not cheating. Whatever it takes to get to a superior piece of art at the end.
Happens all the time in music. A song can change a lot from the time it's written to when it's recorded and released. Input from fellow musicians, producers, record company executives etc, or the reactions of a live concert audience might all inform the final shape of a song.
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Post by Ish Kabbible on Jun 27, 2022 0:25:06 GMT -5
New TV shows just about always shoot a pilot episode to test out with the studio executives, TV critics and sample audiences. They've been doing this since at least the 1960's (Original Star Trek being an early famous example). It's not cheating, it's process
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Post by commond on Jun 27, 2022 4:41:52 GMT -5
Test screening has been happening in Hollywood since the Silent era. The BBC has a decent article about it here -- www.bbc.com/culture/article/20220125-the-iconic-hollywood-films-transformed-by-test-audiencesMost of the changes suggested by test audiences involve changing the ending, improving the pacing of the film, or focusing more on a particular character or character relationship. Sometimes filmmakers are forced to fight the studio over changes, and sometimes the changes cause the film to be a box office hit. There are some famous films that have been completely reworked because of screen testing (Sunset Boulevard, Goodfellas), and other films that have been completely massacred (The Magnificent Ambersons, Bladerunner.) Some filmmakers use test screening to their advantage and some loathe it. I think the mistake you're making is assuming that films are shot from a completed script and that there are few changes made. Most films are finished in the edit. Sometimes footage that was left on the cutting room floor makes it into the final cut after test screening like that big dance number on the freeway in the beginning of La La Land. As for why test screening occurs, it's because there are millions of dollars at stake.
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Post by impulse on Jun 27, 2022 10:21:55 GMT -5
One more vote for the "of course it's not cheating" pile. It's just one of many tools available to filmmakers to finetune the end product.
Now, you could certainly argue that reshoots are often used in a creatively-bankrupt manner by studios or producers to alter an ending after a test audience doesn't like it to tack on a generic happy ending or something, but that's not cheating. It's part of the process.
While I still wouldn't consider this cheating, one thing I think is not cool is when a filmmaker puts a movie out into the world, it connects and find its audience, and then much later after the fact, the filmmaker alters it but uses the new one to fully replace the original. I will name names. Specifically, George Lucas and Star Wars. I am totally down if he wants to make a director's special edition or whatever, but refusing to release the original after it became a cultural landmark and he got rich off its back is not cool. It's his right. It's not cheating. But it's not cool.
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Post by Duragizer on Jun 27, 2022 18:39:12 GMT -5
Short answer: No.
Long answer: No, but the original cut should always be preserved and see a video release later, and it irks me that this rarely happens.
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Post by impulse on Jun 27, 2022 22:11:07 GMT -5
Short answer: No. Long answer: No, but the original cut should always be preserved and see a video release later, and it irks me that this rarely happens. I'll never say no to more versions and alternate endings and such.
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Post by codystarbuck on Jul 3, 2022 12:36:19 GMT -5
Short answer: No. Long answer: No, but the original cut should always be preserved and see a video release later, and it irks me that this rarely happens. I'll never say no to more versions and alternate endings and such. I do, when George Lucas is involved. It's one thing when you give us all of the versions; it's another when you take a big eraser to the original. That's why I ended up getting a copy of the fan-made Star Wars: Deleted Magic. It has the full deleted scenes and some alternate takes, plus things like Dave Prowse's on-set line readings. I have the dvd release with both the original (well, 1980 cut, with further tweaks) Star Wars edit and the Special Editions; but, the presence of the Episode IV chapter title annoys me, since it wasn't there in 1977. At least Deleted Magic has it in its original form. Spielberg can be just as bad, like when they digitally removed shotguns, from government agent hands and replaced them with radios, because they were chasing the kids. Hey, it was in the movie and it was pretty much what would really happen. "Oh, there are kids with that alien, possibly dangerous creature. I better lay down my firearms and only go after the 'dangerous' creature with a field radio!" The Close Encounters dvd I have is annoying, for the alternate versions. Unlike the Blade Runner set, you can't pick a version and watch it in its entirety. You can watch the alternate takes, by themselves and see the additional footage, from the Special Edition, by itself, but not the full Special Edition. The Blade Runner package was far more satisfying, as you could watch the theatrical cut, The Director's Edition, and the Ultimate Edition, if you chose (and I kept my copy I duped off VHS of the European Cut, which was the version available on hoe video, for years, but not included in the set). In the case of Escape From New York, aside from the Laserdisc release, all home video versions were the theatrical cut and nothing else. They put out an anniversary edition that had an interview with John Carpenter, with a couple of seconds of footage from the deleted opening; but that was it. I was happy when they released the collector's dvd set, with the deleted sequences, as a separate (and restored) feature. Watching it, I could see why he deleted them, as it got the movie off to a slow start, compared to starting with Air Force One going down over New York, setting it up as a race against time. The deleted stuff added more to Snake and I had read the novelization, with the expanded material, first and was disappointed when I saw the finished film, without it.
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Post by wildfire2099 on Jul 4, 2022 9:06:19 GMT -5
TV and comics do this too... they put on a bit of story (the 1st season/1/2 season/story line) then they get feedback for the next one. Not any different at all. Plus, they need some special features for the DVD release!
Also, I'd heard that bit Cody posted about Major League.. that wouldn't ruin the movie, but definitely put it in a whole different (and less good) context.
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Post by wildfire2099 on Jul 4, 2022 9:09:49 GMT -5
Echoing others here: definitely not cheating. Whatever it takes to get to a superior piece of art at the end. Happens all the time in music. A song can change a lot from the time it's written to when it's recorded and released. Input from fellow musicians, producers, record company executives etc, or the reactions of a live concert audience might all inform the final shape of a song. This is true... my first love in Rock was Billy Joel (though I've never gotten over the disappointment of him not writing a break up album when he split with Christie Brinkley).. his last box set included demos and early song versions.. cool stuff. There were quite a few where the lyrics were just scrapped and re-done.
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