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Post by captainthor on Aug 21, 2019 15:04:28 GMT -5
Hi all, Welcome to my first review thread. I'll be focusing on Iron Man in these reviews. The reason why I've picked Iron Man is because it was the first Iron Man film which really sparked my interest in comics (combined with The Dark Knight but there are plenty of great Batman reviews out there). Moreover, I feel like Iron Man is occasionally an under-appreciated character. Sadly he has not always been written as well as I would like him to be but, when he is written well, he is an extremely engaging and interesting character who is significantly more flawed than the majority of superheroes are. The review will focus on Iron Man's character from Tales of Suspense through to the various iterations of the Iron Man comic. I'll likely also expand to detail reviews of the various Marvel events that have included Iron Man along with the various spin-offs and one-shots that have emerged focusing on the character. I will NOT be dealing with Iron Man's role as an Avenger or a member of Force Works and the various groups which Iron Man has been a part of unless those appearances involve an event which impacts on the main Iron Man continuity (for example, I will not be dealing with the Kree/Skrull War but I will deal with events like Operation: Galactic Storm or Civil War which cross over into the main title. I'm currently undecided how I'll deal with events like Secret Wars which are separate, universal events (rather than being part of The Avengers) but which do not directly tie into the main Iron Man title). Grading SystemThe first criteria I'll use when grading a given story is whether I enjoyed it or not. This is, obviously, the first criteria to be used when trying to measure the quality of a comic book. If I enjoyed reading it, it will automatically get a C from me. I'll give a D for works which I personally did not enjoy but which had enough redeeming qualities that I could see why somebody else might enjoy it. An F will be rare and will be reserved for stories which I did not enjoy where I cannot feasibly see why somebody would enjoy the storyline. A C will generally be for storylines which I enjoy as entertainment but which fail to go beyond that in any way. A B will normally be reserved for works which I enjoyed and which contained either strong characterization or a reasonable level of thematic depth. An A will be reserved for works which contain something a little bit special, normally either through exceptional characterization or a high level of thematic depth and quality. Links To Reviews
Tales of Suspense 39- classiccomics.org/post/331134/threadTales of Suspense 40- classiccomics.org/post/331179/threadTales of Suspense 41- classiccomics.org/post/331374/threadTales of Suspense 42- classiccomics.org/post/331665/threadTales of Suspense 43- classiccomics.org/post/332078/threadTales of Suspense 44- classiccomics.org/post/332257/threadTales of Suspense 45- classiccomics.org/post/332491/threadTales of Suspense 46- classiccomics.org/post/334222/threadTales of Suspense 47- classiccomics.org/post/334271/threadTales of Suspense 48- classiccomics.org/post/334348/threadInteresting Other Posts
Reptisaurus' Review- ToS 39: classiccomics.org/post/331210/threadReptisaurus' Review- ToS 40: classiccomics.org/post/332176/threadAny feedback, criticism, discussions or praise are encouraged and welcome!
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Post by codystarbuck on Aug 21, 2019 15:25:04 GMT -5
Well, it's gonna be a while before you get to my favorite period: the late 70s, when David Michelinie and JRJR were on the book (plus the Byrne issues). I ma a fan of some of the Colan issues and some from the early-mid 70s, when he was facing the Controller, the Blood Brothers, Blizzard, etc... Always kind of lukewarm to the early stuff. It took a while to really get into who Stark was and I still don't think it was solved, until that late 70s run.
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Post by captainthor on Aug 21, 2019 16:08:59 GMT -5
Tales of Suspense Issue 39- "Iron Man Is Born"
Plot: Stan Lee Script: Larry Lieber Art: Don Heck Lettering: Artie Simek
Grade: B-
Synopsis: Millionaire inventor, weapons designer and playboy Anthony Stark travels to Vietnam to help the American government design weapons to combat the Vietcong rebels. Stark has developed tiny transistors which can be used to miniaturise heavy artillery to allow American troops to transport their most powerful weaponry through the Vietnamese jungle. Sadly, when travelling with a group of American soldiers into the jungle, a booby trap is activated. This kills the soldiers and a piece of shrapnel is lodged close to Stark's heart as he is captured by the local warlord Wong-Chu.
Stark is then tasked with designing weapons for Wong-Chu. If Stark succeeds, Wong-Chu will allow a surgeon to remove the shrapnel from his heart and save his life. Stark is assigned Professor Yinsen, a famous physicist, as his assistant. The two agree to create an "Iron Man" suit to protect Stark's heart and to serve as a weapon to allow them both to escape from Wong-Chu's captivity.
As the Iron Man suit is charging after being completed, an alarm flashes informing Yinsen that Wong-Chu is approaching. Yinsen creates a diversion which sadly leads to his demise. The distraction succeeds and the Iron Man suit successfully activates. Using the suit, Stark escapes from Wong-Chu's camp after defeating him in a wrestling contest and blowing up a depot of ammunition in the process.
Analysis: Tony Stark, as a character, was modelled after Howard Hughes. When creating the character, Stan Lee sought to create a hero who readers could relate to even though his profession and personality would lead a reader to automatically assume that Tony Stark was not a hero. This issue does a reasonable job at setting the groundwork of Stark's character. It successfully highlights that Tony Stark is a playboy. It emphasises the surface glamour of Tony Stark's wealth and position. It highlights that Stark is highly intelligent, a brilliant inventor and an extraordinarily creative thinker. When Tony Stark is creating the Iron Man suit it shows that Stark is a highly driven and capable person. He is able to create the Iron Man suit under a huge amount of pressure in a short period of time.
This is the issue's greatest strength. It manages to create the basic template of Tony Stark's character efficiently and effectively. This is the main function of an origin story and the storyline's success in achieving this is the story's main strength. After reading the issue, you get a good idea of who Tony Stark is, at least on a surface level. Personally, despite its flaws, I also enjoyed reading the issue. It's an enjoyable Silver Age story that isn't too ludicrous. This combination allows me to give it a B in terms of quality, even though the flaws in the story cause me to add a "minus" to that.
One of the major flaws in the story is a huge recurring issue within Stan Lee's run writing Iron Man. The purpose of the character is to be a character who is deeply flawed and often hard to like but who is a hero and a noble character who the reader cannot help but root for. When he is written well, Tony Stark often fulfils that role and can be a major protagonist in some excellent storylines.
However, this does not fit into the conventions created by Stan Lee in the Silver Age. The planned depiction of Tony Stark as a hero who is easy to dislike is softened by the cartoonish depiction of Wong-Chu as a Silver Age villain.
Tony Stark is a weapons designer who often works for the US government. This should be fertile ground for some highly effective storytelling. The first Iron Man film shows how this issue should be dealt with to create a version of Tony Stark who is both flawed and heroic. Stan Lee fails to do this. If the enemies of the US, in this case represented by Wong-Chu, are cartoonishly evil then the issues with Stark's profession are significantly mitigated to the point where its effectiveness as a storytelling device is practically eliminated. It isn't a bad thing to create weapons to fight and successfully overthrow a cartoonishly evil villain. Stan Lee is unwilling to really explore the implications of Tony Stark as a character in the context of the Cold War. The communists in his storylines are always villainous personalities with very little complexity to their personality. This means that Lee is unable to fully explore the implications of Stark's role as a weapons designer.
This largely appears to have been a conscious decision from Stan Lee. He didn't want to criticise the US' role in the Cold War but he often didn't want to praise it either. As this was a highly controversial issue, it makes sense from a commercial perspective that Lee would not want to alienate his potential readers by taking a firm stance on the issue. Sadly this stance stopped Lee from really exploring the dynamic which could have been exploited at the time to create a truly interesting and three-dimensional character. Storylines that emerged after the Iraq war, such as Extremis and the original Iron Man movie, did a far better job at exploring these issues in an interesting way. Given the context of the Vietnam war and the Cold War, this could have been an exceptional run for Iron Man as a character. Sadly the tropes of Silver Age storytelling were often too simplistic to allow for the type of storytelling which could have allowed Stark to really flourish as a character at the time. Instead Stark often simply comes across as a generic hero and the issues caused by his role as a munitions designer are ignored in favour of more typical Silver Age storylines.
On a more positive note, the storyline does a decent job at laying the groundwork of one of Iron Man's more distinctive character traits. Often Iron Man is compared to Batman as a character. On the surface there are similarities. They are both highly wealthy. They are both playboys. They both have an alter ego who fights crime. But there's a panel on page 9 of the story where Iron Man laments that he will have to spend the rest of his life wearing the metal chestplate. Often Bruce Wayne's role as Batman takes priority over his Bruce Wayne persona. Batman does not enjoy being Bruce Wayne a lot of the time. This is different to Iron Man who enjoys being a playboy millionaire industrialist and is frustrated when he cannot do so. Nobody reads a Batman comic because of Bruce Wayne. I often find, when reading an Iron Man story, that Tony Stark's role is more interesting than the antics of Iron Man. The events of this story significantly curtail Tony Stark's ability to be Tony Stark. Sadly, this storyline is abused in the Silver Age to the point where it ceases to become interesting. It would have been interesting to create an arc exploring this aspect of Stark's character. The fact that this becomes the melodrama for Iron Man throughout the Silver Age starts to wear thin fairly quickly. But, this storyline does a good job at establishing that aspect of the character and I cannot blame this story for the failures of its successors. I'll rant more about this and the overuse of Stark's heart problems in his early storylines in later reviews.
Overall, this is a good opening story for Iron Man. It is not the best Silver Age origin story. It's not as good as, for example, the origin of Spider-Man. But it does a competent job establishing Iron Man's character and showing his transition into Iron Man and lays the basis of an interesting character. Sadly it is let down by an unwillingness to fully explore the most interesting aspect of Stark's character, namely that he is a deeply flawed hero. When reviewing this story I cannot help to compare it to the first Iron Man film and this is a case where I think that the film deals with the origin story more effectively than the source material does. The film focuses more on the implications of Stark as an expert in munitions and how his role as Iron Man changes him and his view on life. As Stan Lee is unwilling or unable to fully explore the political implications of Stark's role as a weapons designer in the Vietnam War he is unable to explore this aspect of the character. Instead the focus shifts to Stark's heart condition and the limitations on his role as a playboy. This could have been an interesting storyline, and this story does a good job of laying the groundwork for a potentially interesting story and character arc over a short period of time. But this aspect of Stark's character becomes far too melodramatic in future storylines and these issues drive his character arc for far too long. Stark's heart problems become old very quickly. However, I cannot hold the flaws of future storylines against this story so it gets a B- as it's an enjoyable read with competent, if basic, characterization.
Any feedback or comments are welcome!
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Post by captainthor on Aug 21, 2019 16:14:39 GMT -5
Well, it's gonna be a while before you get to my favorite period: the late 70s, when David Michelinie and JRJR were on the book (plus the Byrne issues). I ma a fan of some of the Colan issues and some from the early-mid 70s, when he was facing the Controller, the Blood Brothers, Blizzard, etc... Always kind of lukewarm to the early stuff. It took a while to really get into who Stark was and I still don't think it was solved, until that late 70s run. I largely agree about Stark's early stories. He's a character who requires complexity and shades of grey and who doesn't really get them due to the limitations of Silver Age storytelling. Michelinie's two runs, O'Neil's run and Byrne's run really establish the character in a more effective way and that's when Iron Man becomes a truly interesting character. Stan Lee is a great figure in comics and rightly so. But he was always more comfortable writing fantastical stories for characters like the Fantastic Four and Thor. Iron Man was a different character who didn't work as well in that context. I'll also say that it's not Lee's worst work though, he struggled more with other characters and there are some espionage stories which are at least enjoyable in his early run. Archie Goodwin tried to explore the political implications of Iron Man a bit more and his run is a huge step-up on Lee's run in my opinion even though it doesn't reach the level which Michelinie would later reach. Things then dip again under Conway and Mantlo.
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Post by Icctrombone on Aug 21, 2019 16:23:18 GMT -5
Welcome to the forum and good luck with the thread. Iron Man is a favorite of mine and he has been blessed with many great artists through the years. I also enjoyed the Michelinie/ Romita Jr/ Layton run. I also loved the alcohol addiction run with O’Neil and McDonald.
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Post by Icctrombone on Aug 21, 2019 16:23:58 GMT -5
Just a suggestion- maybe adding pictures and/ or covers will spice up the reviews.
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Post by captainthor on Aug 21, 2019 17:44:54 GMT -5
Just a suggestion- maybe adding pictures and/ or covers will spice up the reviews. I'll see what I can do on that front. Still trying to figure out how to format these reviews in a way which will make them enjoyable to read.
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Post by codystarbuck on Aug 21, 2019 18:20:46 GMT -5
The connection to Hughes is obvious and points out how simplistic Lee was in these things. Hughes was hardly a heroic figure. He had a ton of faults, beyond his mental illness (rabid anti-communist, to the point of pure paranoia and bigotry, exploiter of women, dirty deals, etc). Lee wanted a mix of traditional playboy and heroic scientist; but can't seem to rectify the two.
Stan has always been described as too liberal for Ditko and too conservative for Kirby; which about sums it up. As a writer, he needed a strong idea man to bounce off of, when working with an artist. With Kirby and Ditko, he hit the jackpot. With Don Heck, he was left more to his own devices, which meant Commies as villains. it was old in the 50s and it didn't really fly, in the 60s. Iron Man is a very 1950s idea of a hero, which becomes problematic the more the Vietnam War turns into a fiasco and quagmire. When the younger generation comes into their own at Marvel, they move Stark away from munitions, as they were closer to the war than Stan. Stan's generation, often, thought the fight against Communism was the same as the battle with Fascism, in WW2. Problem is, Vietnam wasn't that simple, starting with Ho Chi Minh and the fight against the French.
The other thing missing is the science. Kirby was a science and sci-fi buff, which led to more accurate or at least more plausible science in their collaborations. Here, Lee thinks transistors are miracle devices that create mini-super weapons. The miniature mortars are the perfect example of his false thinking. there are no electronics in a mortar. It's a very simple weapon. It is a tube with a firing pin. Bombs are dropped into it and the pin sets off the primer charge, which launches the bomb in an arc, to rain down on top of an enemy. It's pretty basic physics. We already had small field mortars, around 40 mm (UK, Soviets had a 37 mm), with 60 mm being average. Such a short barrel as depicted by Heck wouldn't be capable of launching in a wide enough arc to be of use. Even a flare mortar, used for emergency situations, is bigger than that.
Transistors were parts of electronic systems, taking the place of much larger vacuum tubes; put, the real revolution would be in printed circuits and silicone chips, which was still to come. The science in Stark's armor has always been dicey, starting with flexibility vs strength. Later writers tried to rationalize things a bit better, though it always boiled down to comic book miracle science. The true draw in Iron man is seeing him fight gimmick villains and have to improvise a way to defeat them. That will be a while in coming, as we deal with Commies.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 21, 2019 18:34:20 GMT -5
Wow! That first review was detailed. I am jealous. I usually struggle writing reviews and therefore mine are so brief.
I also think adding some pictures would be great. And I am also one of those fans that didn't get into Iron Man until the 70's. I agree with your assessment of Stan writing Iron Man as well as codystarbuck's analysis.
You are off to a great start and I look forward to this thread since the Tales of Suspense Iron Man stories are something I have not read much of.
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Post by captainthor on Aug 21, 2019 19:27:02 GMT -5
Tales of Suspense 40- Iron Man Versus Gargantus Plot: Stan Lee Script: Robert Bernstein Art: Jack Kirby Inking: Don Heck Grade: D+Cover: Synopsis: The issue starts with an exploration of the three aspects of Iron Man's life. The first aspect is his role as a scientist and a weapons designer. This role involves him giving roller-skates to soldiers (I mean it is the Silver Age). The second aspect is in his role as a playboy where he is unable to go swimming with one of his lady friends due to the metal chestpiece which he is forced to wear. The third aspect is his role as Iron Man where he does normal superhero things such as beating up gangsters and mad scientists. Tony is then on a date with a girl called Marion (it is speculated that she is Marianne Rodgers but we'll discuss her character more in the 70s when she becomes more prominent). This date is to the circus and it is interrupted when the big cats escape and start causing havoc. Tony puts on the Iron Man suit and is alarmed by the negative reaction to his appearance. After subduing the cats he rejoins Marion who suggests that a gold suit would look less terrifying. Tony paints his suit gold. Marion then stands Tony up for their next date because her town, Granville, is... being hypnotised by a giant robot caveman controlled by aliens who subdued the Earth 80,000 years ago. Because a regular caveman would just be completely ridiculous. Analysis: Ok, I was almost tempted to move this up to a C-. Before you all look at me like I'm completely crazy I'll justify where my head was at. The first half of that story... actually isn't bad. It contains decent characterisation. It looks at Stark as a character and expands on a conflict and an aspect of the character. It looks at the conflict between his role as a playboy and his role as Iron Man. As I discussed in my review of Tales of Suspense 39, Stark is often compared to Bruce Wayne due to the superficial similarities between the two characters. A major difference between them is that Tony Stark is more important to an Iron Man story than Bruce Wayne is to a Batman story. Tony Stark enjoys being Tony Stark. He enjoys the playboy lifestyle. Focusing on how being Iron Man impacts on his playboy lifestyle is a completely valid way to explore the character. The issue is that that exploration becomes repetitive and overplayed very quickly. It doesn't take long for the whole playboy lifestyle versus secret identity conflict to get old. But that isn't the case here and I cannot fault this issue for the flaws of its successors. It's a good thing to explore here and it's done well. The issue is explored but Stan Lee does not linger on it too long. However, there are still huge issues with this story. Let me start with the second half of the story. The villain, Gargantus, is ridiculous even by Silver Age standards. I do give some leeway in plotting. Superhero stories are not meant to conform exactly to the scientific laws which underpin the real world. I can suspend my disbelief. But only to a point. I can just about suspend my disbelief that transistors can miniaturise weapons to make them more powerful in this universe and that they can power a massive electronic suit of armour. Fine. It doesn't show a high level of scientific acumen but I can live with it. But the robot caveman thing is ridiculous and the plot leaps from one plot point to another so quickly that it would not be possible to make this story realistic. I mean the end of the story really just says, "Oh yeah there are aliens controlling the robot". And just leaves it there. The fact that this is a bad Silver Age plot means that it loses points in my opinion. Moreover, Iron Man doesn't work well in this type of plot. Although I will continually complain in these early reviews about the simplistic portrayal of the Commies and the inability to properly exploit the Cold War context of these stories, at least an espionage or a spy story with a central focus on tensions between Russia and the USA fits Iron Man's character. It's a type of story which Iron Man should be participating in. When Iron Man is forced to fight a more fantastical villain like Gargantus I'm often left thinking that it would be a better story if it were a Thor story. For the record when I'm reading a Thor story where he's fighting Commies in the Silver Age I'm often left thinking that it would be a better fit for an Iron Man story. Even though I often have issues with the execution of stories which focus on Iron Man against Russian agents, at least the core concept seems to fit Iron Man. A giant alien robot caveman? The concept doesn't fit Iron Man and the story loses points for that. Moreover, I have a big issue with the more successful first half of the story which focuses more on the character of Tony Stark and Iron Man. I like that Stan Lee looks at how Tony's new role as Iron Man impacts on his playboy lifestyle. It's the best thing about this story. It's the main redeeming quality of the story. But I would also have liked to have seen how Tony's new role as Iron Man affects his role as a scientist and a designer of weapons. Has his outlook on life changed as a result of his experiences in Vietnam? Has his view on munitions work changed? Are there doubts within his mind about whether he can be a weapons designer and a superhero simultaneously? These topics just aren't explored in the story. Tony Stark is simply shown to be a weapons designer and a scientist and it's left there. It's also a minor point but the roller skates are a classic example of Silver Age ridiculousness and it does not help the story. A final thing to note, and this is neither something which I'm going to praise or which I'm going to criticise but it interests me. I find it interesting, given the surface parallels between Stark and Bruce Wayne, that Bruce Wayne's costume was designed to intimidate people while Tony Stark's was altered in order to do exactly the opposite. I think it's a good example of how the two characters have completely different personalities despite the fact that they're often compared to each other. Personally, I've always felt like Stark reminds me more of a heroic Marvel counterpart to Lex Luthor rather than a Marvel counterpart to Batman. I've just always found the comparisons between Iron Man and Batman to be fairly interesting given that I view them as two completely different personalities.
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Post by captainthor on Aug 21, 2019 19:44:34 GMT -5
The connection to Hughes is obvious and points out how simplistic Lee was in these things. Hughes was hardly a heroic figure. He had a ton of faults, beyond his mental illness (rabid anti-communist, to the point of pure paranoia and bigotry, exploiter of women, dirty deals, etc). Lee wanted a mix of traditional playboy and heroic scientist; but can't seem to rectify the two. Stan has always been described as too liberal for Ditko and too conservative for Kirby; which about sums it up. As a writer, he needed a strong idea man to bounce off of, when working with an artist. With Kirby and Ditko, he hit the jackpot. With Don Heck, he was left more to his own devices, which meant Commies as villains. it was old in the 50s and it didn't really fly, in the 60s. Iron Man is a very 1950s idea of a hero, which becomes problematic the more the Vietnam War turns into a fiasco and quagmire. When the younger generation comes into their own at Marvel, they move Stark away from munitions, as they were closer to the war than Stan. Stan's generation, often, thought the fight against Communism was the same as the battle with Fascism, in WW2. Problem is, Vietnam wasn't that simple, starting with Ho Chi Minh and the fight against the French. I completely agree with this. The issue with these early Iron Man stories isn't the concept but it's the execution. A Howard Hughes figure who is turned into a superhero by a transformative experience? This happening in the context of a weapons designer during the Cold War? That's... really fertile ground for complex and compelling storytelling. The core premise is very strong. But Stan Lee just isn't the right writer for that type of story. It requires a more subtle writer who is more willing to ask difficult questions and explore complex themes and characterisation. The comics industry just wasn't ready for that character in 1963. It was Stan Lee's era after all. So instead we got a 1950s hero in a completely different context which becomes problematic pretty quickly. I'll admit that I'm more willing to forgive this type of thing. I accept that comic book science is always going to be a little bit wonky. I'm more interested in characterisation, interesting themes and an entertaining story. If those fundamentals are in place I'm willing to forgive a lot of wonky science. But in a context where those basic fundamentals are a little bit lacking the issues with little things like inaccurate science start to become more of an issue for me. Kind of in the sense that it's another black mark against the story in question. Still, interesting stuff for anyone who's more interested in the scientific aspect of these stories.
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Post by captainthor on Aug 21, 2019 19:50:30 GMT -5
Wow! That first review was detailed. I am jealous. I usually struggle writing reviews and therefore mine are so brief. I also think adding some pictures would be great. And I am also one of those fans that didn't get into Iron Man until the 70's. I agree with your assessment of Stan writing Iron Man as well as codystarbuck's analysis. You are off to a great start and I look forward to this thread since the Tales of Suspense Iron Man stories are something I have not read much of. Thanks for the kind words! Was adding a cover picture to the second review helpful or would people prefer more pictures than that to break up the text a bit?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 21, 2019 19:56:53 GMT -5
Wow! That first review was detailed. I am jealous. I usually struggle writing reviews and therefore mine are so brief. I also think adding some pictures would be great. And I am also one of those fans that didn't get into Iron Man until the 70's. I agree with your assessment of Stan writing Iron Man as well as codystarbuck's analysis. You are off to a great start and I look forward to this thread since the Tales of Suspense Iron Man stories are something I have not read much of. Thanks for the kind words! Was adding a cover picture to the second review helpful or would people prefer more pictures than that to break up the text a bit? Adding the cover was great. As far as other pictures? Maybe one or two panels that are important to the story...
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Post by beccabear67 on Aug 21, 2019 21:28:41 GMT -5
It's hard to not enjoy even the flimsier stories of the "transistor powered" era as artifacts of their time. I get more nostalgic about old Iron Man than for Thor or Ant Man of the same time... maybe it is the cold war reflection however simplistic... and yes, it does seem at home in Iron Man, if only it was handed with more flair, or a bit more depth with Iron Man and Tony Stark as bulwarks against the insidious menace. A bit of a James Bond potential not realized, focusing overly much on the weak heart.
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Post by Reptisaurus! on Aug 22, 2019 0:55:07 GMT -5
I'd give the first Iron Man story in Tales of Suspense a straight A. As a reviewer I am laser-focused on the craft of storytelling, and here the craft is impeccable. My persepctive: (A) This is an early silver age Marvel comic, so it's not exactly a superhero comic. Like Fantastic Four # 1 or the Lava Man story in Journey into Mystery # 83, the focus is on darker emotions. Oh, and monsters. Yep, Iron Man is the monster. I bet that 99% of current readers would miss that, but 99% of the intended audience in 1963 would intuitively understand this. "Listen to his ponderous footsteps as he lumbers closer....closer!" You're rooting for the monster, but the tone of the story is dark suspense - damn close to horror - and this story feels more like Frankenstein than Superman. (B) Don Heck is an extremely good suspense artist. He never quite adapted to Kirby style bombast but when he's doing more subtle stuff (like here!) he can be just masterful. The bottom of page 4, especially... Let's walk through this real quick. Panel 1: Conveys explosive action but the camera is still way far away, so the fighting is a little muted, distant. Also note how well Heck defines the setting where the story is happening. Panel 2/3: Amazing. AMAZING. Post-Silver Age there are approximately 0 artists efficient enough to pull this off. A quiet, subtle, moody jungle scene is slash paneled with an extreme close up as the camera STABS in and image is magnified by a thousand in the bottom half. All of a sudden we are no longer distant observers, but we are so close we are seeing things that even the Tony Stark is missing! The literary term for this is... I forget... googles... Dramatic Irony, where the audience knows something the characters don't. How often do you see THAT kinda high-falutin' storytelling in comic books? Panel 3: The camera angle changes again, and we are no longer separated from the scene. Now the camera positions us just very, very slightly above the action (with all the main figures in the panel tilted slightly to indicate surprise and chaos) and BARROOM! The dramatic promise of the last two quiet, subtle panels pays off! Panel 5: Stark looks small and a looming figure is foreshadowing on top of him! We see the briefest hint of a gun aimed at Stark's head. Very subtle, very chilling. Panel 6: Look at the body language here. The "Guerilla Chief" gives a sense of unhurried, masterful arrogance. Heck is really good at imbuing his figures with this kind of muted, calm emotion. (C) This is an extremely suspenseful tale! Moving on, I'm impressed by how the dialog keeps the storytelling pressure up. " Every tick of the clock brings the deadly piece of shrapnel closer to my heart!" (D) Again, very subtle, very chilling. Note how often, and effectively, the "dramatic set-up/payoff" structure is applied. The main focus of panel 3 is the moon! Heck is doing a hell of a job using setting and atmosphere with only quick glances of Iron Man to tell the story. Also, note the the Point of View character switches from Wong-Chu to Iron Man. There's no huge MEANWHILE but see how effectively our main character changes. (E) Again, I think the last few pages are amazing. The narrative POV character changes back to Iron Man and then Wong-Chu again, and the story is now PURE horror, as our hapless Communist villain is stalked by an unrelenting Iron.. thing! You can feel his mounting terror and you have to sympathize with him a little bit because you see the "world" through his eyes and you know he.. is... in... trouble. Except that panel, which is pretty funny. Nice break in the tension. This story completely works for me, although it's very different from what Iron Man would turn into. Although, honestly, I've never been a huge Iron Man fan. And "Man Trapped in the Body of Iron Monster" might be a more interesting hook than what we got. Anyway, Iron Man is not the best Silver Age origin story, but I'd put it at # 3 among major characters. Best Silver Age Origin Stories: 1) Sgt. Rock (errr. the first one) 2) Spider-Man 3) Iron Man 4) Dr. Strange 5) Hawkman (I'd rate Enemy Ace and Secret Six higher, but I can't count them as major.)
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